Reviews for Naked Journey
castofftheday | 2004.10.10 - 03:43AM | 11: Panic and Pain | Signed |
Okay, first off, let me say, feel free to smack me for not reviewing sooner. Because I freakin' love this story. But I gotta say, the "mine/yours" scene at the end is definitely what finally kicked my butt in gear. I mean... wow. I just can't say anything that would justify the feelings that scene brings. Hell, words don't justify the whole story. With the clock, and the naked-hike-camping trip, and BOB! Are sure this is your first story, or am I gonna go to the library and find some pulitzer prize winner by you? Just great. Can't wait for more. Don't be surprised if you happen to notice a stalker in the next couple days. :)
Author's Response: Aw...*Pook blushes and kicks the dirt* Yup, it really is my first story, though I hope to keep writing now that I've jumped into it. I don't think I'd mind having you as a stalker as long as you keep saying such lovely things! :) |
DADA_Mistress | 2004.10.10 - 03:16AM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
*applause* *whistles* Very nice! I loved it! I like the "seraphim" reference. Write on!
Author's Response: Thank you, Mistress! :) |
Jade_Orchid | 2004.10.10 - 12:41AM | 12: Interlude | Anonymous |
Aiee!!! Nonononononono!!! Not this close to home! Dearest Pooka, *please* remind me that there is no character death in this story? Injured, I can handle. After all, they can kiss it and make it better for each other. (snickers) Lovely chapter. I really liked how their pictures on the clock showed facial expressions. Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: My darling Jade, never fear. I am a sacastic romantic, I do not think I shall ever have the heart to write anything but insipidly happy endings! However, I mustn't make it too easy on the poor sods. Love is worth fighting for, after all. :) |
mada | 2004.10.09 - 10:34PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
NO NEED TO GET SNIPPY! I RATHER LIKE CAPS LOCK. ;-) THANKS FOR EXPLAINING, I THOUGHT SOMETHING HAD GONE HORRIBLY WRONG. NOW I SEE. LOVE YOUR STORY.
Author's Response: Are you certain you are quite old enough to be reading my story? I find that most people that enjoy caps lock are 14 year old girls who also enjoy dotting their i's with little hearts. How abismal. |
mada | 2004.10.09 - 10:28PM | 12: Interlude | Anonymous |
Oh my god, nooooooooooooooo. btw, what's a minotaur?
Author's Response: Not to worry, Mada, said minotaur shall be explained in the next chapter. |
NightQueen | 2004.10.09 - 10:09PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
OMG!! I loved this chapter!! Not to say I haven't loved every chapter. But this one was special!!! From the Minute Severus woke to that last delightful sign of his posessive nature was fabulous writing!! Hermione loving him no matter how snarky or Slytherin he is, and him realizing that fact proves her ownership of him also!! Loved every second and I can't wait for chapter 12.
Author's Response: Thank you NightQueen! That was exactly what I was going for. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) |
Terra of Slytherin | 2004.10.09 - 09:08PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Signed |
Severus claims ownership of her and Hermione more than willingly accepts it with it! Excellent work, m'dear! Hope you can post the next chapter soon!
~Terra
Author's Response: I think such ownership is awfully sweet if it works both ways, lol, and I think my Hermione definately owns Severus as well. :) |
mary | 2004.10.09 - 08:53PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
just found your story today and tore through all 13 chapters. more please!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) |
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