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Clair Snape2004.09.21 - 01:14PM6: Walking ThoughtsSigned
Very good, although I do have one question. When Hermione first got there, I thought they were 20 miles apart. But if Severus walked 5 miles and Hermione walked some, they would be 15 miles or less apart, right?

Author's Response: Hmm....this one puzzles me. At the beginning of chapt 2 it states Sev is 37 miles north of Hogwarts. Hermione journeys 15 miles the first day, Sev 5; which leaves them 17 miles apart. Is there a typo somewhere where I put 20 as the beginning distance? If so, let me know and I'll fix it! :)

Darcowyn2004.09.21 - 10:24AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
Argh, don't stop there! Keep it going! More, please, more.

ancientgirl2004.09.21 - 10:23AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
I was starting to wonder why Severus just didn't ride Bob for a while, but you explained it so nevermind. Great chapter. Its good to know he has also been thinking about her, and not just as a student. Please update again soon. I can't wait for her to stumble upon him. I'm wondering if she will come and find him while he's napping. Mmmm, I know I would not mind coming upon a scene like that.

Jade_Orchid2004.09.21 - 10:09AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
Another wonderful chapter! Ok, this has been on my mind, and I don't know if you can answer it without giving anything away, but...in your world, are you using the adage that only a virgin can get near a unicorn? *grin*

Author's Response: NO! No sexy Snape of mine will ever have the audacity to be a virgin! I like my Snapes experienced, if you please! *Author giggles wickedly*. Chapter 2 does mention Albus telling Sev that the unicorns don't care about his lack of virginity, neither do I for that matter. ;)

CathyG2004.09.21 - 09:59AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
What a delightful story! Keep those chapters coming...as far as your explanations before this chapter, thought you might like to know some of your readers had already figured them out for themselves. Hermione would have no need to carry anything she could transfigure...and she can transfigure almost anything except food & potions! Good work! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know I've got some very clever readers, which keeps me on my toes! It's not easy writing fanfic about such a beloved and well known world. I won't always explain my choices when some readers ask about them, but I wanted to try to clear those questions up and show it's not just a question of " because I'm the author, that's why!" I'm terribly glad you 'get it', though! I do try! :)

Darklady2004.09.21 - 09:27AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
I very much admore your writing style. Clever story too. Thank you.

June W2004.09.21 - 08:54AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
Does she know how to use her Snape-compass to triangulate his position? Poor man, I hope his journey isn't filled with traps like the goat-feet lady - eeks!

monina2004.09.21 - 08:52AM6: Walking ThoughtsAnonymous
Great, just it's fantastic the way you write. Your sense of humor, the situations, everithing. Just love it!!

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