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| ancientgirl | 2004.10.07 - 09:18AM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
| Great chapter! I have to thank you for not dragging out the misunderstanding. There is never any point to that if you ask me. You did a great job, he had his moment of confusion, she had hers, she took the plunge and he realized his previous feelings were unfounded, perfect. I loved that little bit at the end, she's his and she knows it. Please update soon, I can't get enough of this. Btw, in case you wanted to know I updated my story. Author's Response: Thank you darlin'! My original intent was to have the misunderstanding begin at the end of chapter 10 and leave it as a clifhanger. But I decided that was far too cruel! I can't wait to read your new chapter! :) | |||
| Leia | 2004.10.07 - 04:26AM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
| Leia's bedtime prayer:
"Dear God, Thank you for my family and friends; bless them and keep them safe - and please let the next chapter of 'Naked Journey' be posted tomorrow. Amen."
lol. ;) Author's Response: *gigglegigglegiggle* You're prayers are answered! At least for today. I'm getting ready to post 11 right now. :) | |||
| DADA_Mistress | 2004.10.06 - 04:18PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Signed |
| Actually, knowing Dumbledore, the clock would probably say "Making whoopie." Ooo, naughty Hermione and Severus! ;) Author's Response: ROFL! "Making whoopie" indeed! ;) | |||
| Viviane | 2004.10.06 - 12:36PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
| Great chapter but now I really wonder what the clock will say about the happening. Possibly "come back later if you're not at least seventeen"? *g* Looking forward for more! viv Author's Response: Silly little girl! *Pook smirks knowingly* Long ago, in a chapter far before the infamous 10, Hermione mentions her current age. My hermione's will always be at least 17, I have no interest in schoolgirl crushes. :) | |||
| Lyndie578 | 2004.10.06 - 11:02AM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Signed |
| Hot, hot, hot! Thanks for this chapter. You just know they're going to have a "Happily Ever After" after that encounter! Marriage, indeed. Author's Response: I am a sucker for 'happilyever after', But Severus and Hermione aren't out of the woods yet! | |||
| DADA_Mistress | 2004.10.06 - 03:35AM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
| Wow, I love this story! I read all 10 chapters in one sitting! A friend recommended this story to me and I'm glad I listened to her advice! This is really good! I love all the different vratures in it too, especially Bob (who caused me to cry at his death). BTW, do you think Albus was watching when the clock in his office said "In Transit" to "Making love"? If so, I think Hermione AND Snape will be expelled. Author's Response: Lol, everyone wants to know what the clock said! I think the clock is fairly discrete, but don't fret, we'll get back to Albus after Hermione and Snape aren't so...busy. Glad you are enjoying it! :) | |||
| Leia | 2004.10.05 - 10:19PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
| EEHEHEHEH!!! HEHEHEHE!!! AHAHA!! Wow. I've been waiting to this chapter and, so far, this is my all time favorite Hermione/Severus fan fic. You write both characters so well - especially Severus. With most fics its hard for me to believe that its actually him - but the way you write him, the way you have him speak - believing is oh so easy. You manage to make him...deliciously sensitive and yet still the gruff potions master we all love. The way he spoke to her while they were, ahem, doing the deed almost "did" me in. I love how there was such a great change in Severus from the beginning of this chapter in comparison with the intimate parts at end. ::claps hands:: Okay, next chapter please??? Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much. I'm going to get a huge head, I'll be altogether insufferable! I think I identify more with Severus than Hermione, he just makes sense to me. At least, my version of him does. :) | |||
| Clair Snape | 2004.10.05 - 09:45PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Signed |
| Wickedly wonderful. I do wonder what Albus's clock says though. Author's Response: *giggle* I see from the reviews that there is much curiosity about the clock! :) | |||
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