Reviews for Naked Journey
June W | 2004.10.14 - 09:02PM | 14: Insight | Anonymous |
Hold on, he is STILL in unicorn mode?? Can't Albus put his own wand in Severus' mouth or hang it on Severus' neck or something and have him transform back? This isn't the end of the road for human-Severus, is it??? Are you trying to set a record for consecutive chapters with cliffhangers?? And how exactly did Ron know the black unicorn was Severus - he just might think it was a very unusual animal!
Author's Response: *Pook snickers wickedly* Actually, I hadn't intended on trying to break any records, things are just heating up! How did Ron know? Insight, baby! Even Ron has sudden flashes of insight, twit that he may be. I'm afraid I can't tell you if Severus will be stuck until the end of time, it's a secret. I only promised not to kill him, after all... *Muahahahaha!* :) |
Titania | 2004.10.14 - 09:01PM | 14: Insight | Anonymous |
Oh! Pooka you make me cry! How lovely! Way to go Ron! Nice to see him getting some respect!
Live long and prosper,
Titania
Author's Response: Thank you, Titania! I wanted to give Ron a good moment. He's often a twit, but he means well. :) |
ancientgirl | 2004.10.14 - 08:55PM | 14: Insight | Anonymous |
OMG, Pooka, I can't stop crying. What an incredibly sad chapter! I don't normally like Ron too much, but I did like how you made him the one who realized at first it was Severus. I also liked how both boys accompanied him back. Boy, this is just killing me, but you wrote a beautiful chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie. I had a bit of trouble getting that chapter where I wanted it. I'm awfully glad you liked it! :) |
Maela | 2004.10.14 - 08:42PM | 14: Insight | Anonymous |
ARgh! Just how is Severus going to regain his true form?! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: *giggle* How? Therin lies the mystery... |
Jana | 2004.10.14 - 06:34PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
If that's his animagus form, I wonder why Severus was confused by the unicorns attention?
Author's Response: Lol, a good point indeed. Though you don't see cats following Minerva around just because that's her form. |
Chani | 2004.10.14 - 04:37PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
oooh! a lot of twist and turns, lady luck just dosen't seem to be with them. please update soon. i can't wait!!
Author's Response: Glad you got a kick out of it! :) |
Invisible Voice | 2004.10.13 - 03:18PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
omgomog! right, you NEED to put up the next chapter! now! or i will DIE! ahem. great going!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command! :) |
WriterLady1031 | 2004.10.13 - 02:40AM | 13: Fate and Irony | Signed |
Wow! He totally got the minotaur by surprise. I know I wouldn't have been expecting a useless and defenseless beast to kill such a big thing like a minotaur...well at least I think that's what the beast would be thinking. *shrugs her shoulders* And the irony of Snapes' animagus form was a nice touch. It explains Bob's attraction to him somewhat. This story is just moving right along. You're doing a great job, Pook! And you're welcome for the compliments. ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks again, WriterLady, it's regular readers like you that kkep me writing away! :) |
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