Reviews for Naked Journey
Jong_Kahn | 2013.02.08 - 04:43AM | 11: Panic and Pain | Signed |
"Hard as a tree branch and soft as a rose petal." Ah, here you have poetically described why the profane can be sacred. The wonder with which a new young lover discovers that beautifully vulnerable fearless masculine scepter. You have captured the beauty and excitement (in both senses!) of their mutual chase--lovely! I am so glad I've been rereading your stories. The highest praise I can give you is that they are well worth rereading. Even after all the years from when you wrote this, the work you did still shows in quality. I thank you for the pleasure your writing brings me. |
Jong_Kahn | 2013.02.08 - 01:57AM | 3: Alone | Signed |
"Severus stood there, exhausted, hurt, blocking every curse thrown at you until the rest of the Order could break through. I’ve never seen anyone move so fast. It was the most terrifying and beautiful thing I’ve ever seen in my life. I couldn’t deny my feelings after that.” In a nutshell, this kind of Snapean image is what motivates virtually all of us to come here to Ashwinder. That was a perfect description. Thank you.
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Mistris mayhem | 2012.04.18 - 11:21PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
That last part made me cry. I just found this today, and was so sad that bob died. I'm so glad that severus went back to honor him. |
Montara | 2012.03.19 - 08:56AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Loved it. Thank you! |
kci47 | 2011.12.22 - 12:45PM | 3: Alone | Signed |
Decided to leave this review on the chapter with the fewest...GREAT story! I loved your writing style, your characterizations were perfect, and Bob...ah, what a great name for such a noble beast! Well done! |
Elizadolots | 2011.11.29 - 01:14AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
This is a story I re-read often...it's so joyful, so fun, so engaging. |
crownglass39 | 2011.10.17 - 07:58PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Okay, the ending to this didn't just make me cry but broke me just a little.
Beautiful fic!
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Cheryl Grant | 2011.07.18 - 01:28AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Loved this story ... I love Severus/Hermione stories where he is hopeful and allows himself to love. *sigh*
And the unicorn 'catnip' had me howling with laughter!! |
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