Reviews for Naked Journey
Stormi | 2004.09.28 - 05:20PM | 7: Until Death do Part | Anonymous |
I'm really sad that Bob died but wanted you to know that the chapter was written beautifully.
It almost made me cry. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you Stormi. I must admit, it made me a bit weepy when I wrote it. But then, while I don't cry much in life, I'm a soft touch when it comes to books and movies. I still cry when I watch Dumbo...you know the bit when Mrs. Jumbo is locked up and has to reach out through the bars to sing baby Dumbo a lullaby? Gets me every time. I'm absolutely pathetic! :) |
Caliko | 2004.09.27 - 06:01PM | 8: Patience and Patient | Anonymous |
Ah.. delicious.. naked, helpless Snape.... hmmm.. what would he do if Hermione refused him clothes? I know I would.. I would keep him naked, in a cage, in the deepest, warmest part of his dungeon..... /snicker/
Author's Response: I must say that I greatly admire the way you think. |
Ezmerelda | 2004.09.26 - 08:27PM | 8: Patience and Patient | Signed |
I love that Severus is the catnip equivalent to unicorns.
Lovely story, thanks for writing! ~"~
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :) |
Gia | 2004.09.26 - 02:19AM | 8: Patience and Patient | Anonymous |
Wonderful chapter!! Thanks for the frequent updates. I have to admit I'm addicted to this story. Thank you for keeping Snape & Hermione in character. All too often I see authors using slang that neither character would use, or having the characters fling themselves together after three lines of dialogue. I like the "slow burn" you've created for them here. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Gia! I've tried really hard to keep them both in character. I know I've taken some artistic license with both of them, but I'm glad they are still recognizable.
Lol, sometimes I like those stories where they suddenly throw themselves at each other, but it's not very realistic, is it?! :) |
Jade_Orchid | 2004.09.25 - 11:22PM | 8: Patience and Patient | Anonymous |
This chapter was so sweet! The image of him letting her hold him was beautiful. I hate that Bob is gone... sniff! But a wonderful section all the same.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jade, your continued comments mean a lot to me. Glad you like it so far! :) |
mijita | 2004.09.25 - 09:34PM | 8: Patience and Patient | Anonymous |
Fantastic Fic! I love the humor and fun of this story. And that Snape is nekkid. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, mijita. I love that Snape is nekkid too! ;) |
Carol | 2004.09.25 - 09:17PM | 8: Patience and Patient | Anonymous |
Another great chapter. If I were Hermione, I would have cast a werming charm on Severus so that I wouldnt' have to cover him at all! I suppose that would have been a bit obvious though. ::sigh:: If unicorns are hopelessly drawn to Severus, will they find another? It would give them reason to talk about... lemoniness... and stuff... right. Anyway, thanks for writing, as always. I look forward to seeing more. |
bookwmnjan | 2004.09.25 - 09:09PM | 8: Patience and Patient | Anonymous |
This story just gets better and better. Thanks for the update. I am greedily looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) |
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