Reviews for Naked Journey
snapeloverx | 2004.10.05 - 05:46PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
I really love this story so far, it is so well written! I love the description of the unicorn, I bet you have a horse or have experience of horses don't you? Wonderful!
Author's Response: I don't have near the experience with horses I wish I had. Lol, I'm almost 40 and I'm still in love with horses! I do, however, have a thing for Zane Grey novels. |
CLARALUNA | 2004.10.05 - 03:59PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
I wonder... what Albus' clock will say on those moments of pasion? Do not disturb? Bussy at the moment, come back latter? Making babies?...
Author's Response: 'Making Babies'! *gigglegigglegiggle* I like that suggestion best of all. I'm afraid we've left Albus in the lurch for the moment, but we'll catch up with him later. :) |
WriterLady1031 | 2004.10.05 - 03:35PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Signed |
Another great chapter! Please continue writing!
Author's Response: I'll keep writing if you keep reading. Deal? :) |
WriterLady1031 | 2004.10.05 - 03:21PM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
Interesting chapter! I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
edlweiss1 | 2004.10.05 - 11:27AM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Anonymous |
where is it? it says chapter 10 has been added but it's not here! *cries*.
i need to read the next chapter - this story is like crack!
Author's Response: Ha! Like 'crack'! That's the best compliment a writer can recieve in my opinion. It thrills me that you all are so anxious for more. I posted chapt 10 very late last night, it will show up in the public site as soon as fantabulous Ashwinder mods ok it. :) |
zambonigirl | 2004.10.05 - 10:20AM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Anonymous |
I know that chapter 10 must be up, but it's not showing.
Still, I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm sorry that I haven't been leaving reviews. I generally print out the chapter and read it while I'm supposed to be w*rking, and I'm just too lazy to go back and tell you how much I like it. But this has given me a great opportunity. I am sorry that you killed poor Bob off, but I like how you had Snape react to him. I also love how he and Hermione interact with each other. You've managed to take an impossible situation and make it completely believable and very close to character. I'm quite proud of you, really.
~Zambi
Author's Response: Thank you, Zambi. I appreciate you taking the time to comment, it means a lot to me. I've posted chapter 10, but it takes a bit of time for the Ashwinder mods to approve it. They're a hard working bunch. Check back again, it should go public today or tomorrow. :) |
Jade_Orchid | 2004.10.05 - 09:14AM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
Klaa... (wipes drool off face and turns fan on high) Not live up to expectations?! Are you *crazy,* dear Pooka? That was delicious! Funny, tender, sensual, and out and out hot! I certainly wouldn't have known you were not experienced with writing such things. In addition to the lovely smut, the humor is this chapter had me howling. Snape in a lavender suit! That in itself makes me drool. I love purple in all its shades. Thank you, thank you for the update! Now, please write more smut for their long journey home!
Author's Response: *Pook giggles wickedly* Oh yes, more smut approaches rather rapidly. Thanks so much, Jade. Your reviews always make me feel like I actually know what I'm doing with this new-found writing addiction of mine. :) |
Snape Fan | 2004.10.05 - 08:58AM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Anonymous |
Well! All I can say is I should NOT read this story while at work! I have ignored phone calls, emails and people coming in my office for this chapter! And it was worth it - you had me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for the next chapter! Ces
Author's Response: Thanks, Ces! Here I am at work, trying to answer some of these kind reviews. Do you suppose if we run away to join the circus we'd have more reading/writing time? :) |
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