Reviews for Naked Journey
amra | 2005.10.08 - 12:40PM | 1: The First Step | Signed |
Unique beginning, with a flicker of potential... "her traitorous heart...", "... his eyes wide.... arms full of curvy young woman...", "... his heroism...", and then "...the sudden look of hope that lighted up Hermione's tear-stained face."
The stage is set!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I'm feel like my beginnings are a bit weak, but I'm working on it! Thanks! :) |
illnevertell | 2005.09.22 - 09:22AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Really wonderful story. I truly enjoyed every minute of it. Poor Bob and Poor Severus. That part brought tears to my eyes and the visual I got from reading about the odd parade of a tall naked wizard, eight floating apples, and a prancing unicorn gave me a fit of the giggles that lasted for a good twenty minutes. Kudos! This is one of those great fan fics that should be noted as a classic.
Jaimie
Author's Response: What a sweet review! Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to let me know what you thought of it! :) |
Caro6589 | 2005.09.20 - 11:40PM | 1: The First Step | Signed |
"perhaps Mr. Longbottom would be better able to concentrate if his lab partner did not insist on doing a remarkable impersonation of Medusa’s best wig." Ha, what a sentence ! I love it :-)
Author's Response: You know, I always liked that sentence, but I think you are the first to mention it! Thanks! :) |
Moey_Pie | 2005.09.14 - 10:06PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
You did a great job!! i love the fact that he was a black unicorn... it fits!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was afraid picking that Animagus was going a bit far, but since the story was a farce, I couldn't resist! Thanks! :) |
SecretlySeverus | 2005.09.01 - 12:51AM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
*sniff* I point blank refuse to believe this was your first attempt at fan fiction! how incredibly wonderful... after reading your other story "Overcome with Feeling" i simply had to explore your other stories, and I'm so glad I did... you have an amazing talent, and I look forward to reading many more stories written by you!!
Author's Response: Not only was this my first fanfic, it's the first time I have done any creative writing since I was in high school! (and that was rather a long time ago!) I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks! :) |
JenKM1216 | 2005.08.24 - 10:39PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
Oh! You made me cry! I love this story. It is one of the best I have read in a while. I read a lot, so I hope you will see this as ardent praise I truly mean.
Author's Response: How sweet! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And thank you for taking the time to tell me! :) |
MakalaniAstral | 2005.08.12 - 01:30PM | 18: Remembrance | Signed |
aw! that was soooo good! touching about bob.
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved Bob. To this day I can't even look at the epilogue to this fic without getting all wistful! :) |
lady boo | 2005.07.24 - 06:24PM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Signed |
Suddenly its got very warm in this story *casts cooling charm* I doubt very much weather we would find a muggle pharmacist as sexy as our potions master, Oh well,sigh i can but dream i suppose, very well written pook. L.B
Author's Response: Thanks, LB! I'm glad you are enjoying it! :) |
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