Reviews for Naked Journey
Aurealis | 2004.10.12 - 03:50PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
I love this chapter! Well done. I kept wincing at the descriptions of the animal's attacks on Snape and Hermione. Cracking bones and gored backs... agh! Anyway, I seriously thought that Snape's animagus form was going to be a bright pink pig, by the way you were hyping it up. Your choise was better. No wonder unicorns love (and sniff at) him!
Author's Response: *giggle* I rather wish I had thought of a bright pink pig! :D |
Zara | 2004.10.12 - 03:46PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
Hi,
i love the story but something irked,
“Ah…no.” Albus whispered. “Not that sweet girl. Poor Severus…my dear boy, fortune has never given you a chance of happiness has she…the vicious Jezebel.”
the vicious Jezebel? that sat a little strangley with the image of Albus Dumbeldore.
other than that i just thought i'd say well done and keep going. also, aaaggrrh why do you always have to leave us on a cliffie!
xx zara
Author's Response: I have to leave you perched on a cliff because it's wicked fun! *Mhahahahaha* I rather like Albus thinking of Fate as a traitorous woman, but we all have different versions of Albus running around in our heads, eyes twinkling like mad. :) |
aramintasnape | 2004.10.12 - 02:40PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
Oh no! Let's hope he gets back to Hermione in time (somehow I have a feeling he will!) The unicorn Animagus was a nice touch!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
Mlecin | 2004.10.12 - 02:28PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
Beautifully written! BTW, 'seraphim' is plural - singular would be 'seraph', and I'm sure Severus would know that :)
Author's Response: Lol, of course he would, as do I, normally. Thanks for catching it, alert reader! :) |
zambonigirl | 2004.10.12 - 01:35PM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
LOL! I love your sense of humor, that is too awesome. Now that I've friended you on you LJ, I will start pestering you for the next chapter more regularly.
On an aside note, I am very worried about Hermione...I hope Snape gets to her in time.
Author's Response: Of course he will, Zambi! How could I do otherwise? :) |
Fictionlover_32 | 2004.10.12 - 01:01PM | 12: Interlude | Anonymous |
Hey, I thought you updated this chapter already? where's chapter 13?
Author's Response: It's up now. :) |
Clair Snape | 2004.10.12 - 11:55AM | 12: Interlude | Signed |
-shakes head- This really isn't going to be good.
Author's Response: I'm afraid not, but it gets better, I promise! :) |
erin | 2004.10.12 - 11:47AM | 13: Fate and Irony | Anonymous |
Thank God you didn't make us wait too long!! Hugs to you!
Author's Response: Hugs right back at cha! :) |
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