Reviews for Naked Journey
| angelina j | 2004.09.17 - 12:30PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
| Ok, there is no way I am going to explain to my co-workers that I am sitting here giggling over the idea of a unicorn nibbling on a naked potions master. Thank you for a lovely, absurd, totally irresistable visual. I look forward to more. :) |
| LoopyLoonyLuna | 2004.09.17 - 12:04PM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
A wonderful start to an extremely promising story. I can barely wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks to all for your wonderfully encouraging comments! Makes me want to get back to it this second; sigh, must get home from work first. Thank gods it's friday!
More is on the way, just need to give the overworked mods a chance to preview it.
Thanks all! |
| nesscafe | 2004.09.17 - 11:54AM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
| Oh this is just too cute! I don't know whether to be giddy about a naked Severus trotting about w/ unicorns or lmao! Hehe! For the same reasons! Love it! write more! |
| Sherlock | 2004.09.17 - 10:25AM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
| HEHEHE! This is fun stuff. I love the unicorn's reaction to Sev. Made me laugh out loud. I must admit that when I was browsing Ashwinder and I saw the title "Naked Journey" and that the summary had to do with potions accidents that I had this picture in my mind of Hermione AND Severus stuck in some alternate universe...together...and naked! But, I must say this is infinately better.
Update soon! |
| SCSPaine | 2004.09.17 - 10:04AM | 2: Lost | Signed |
| Great story! The image of the unicorns following Snape around (and his resulting irritation) is hilarious. Keep writing! |
| Titania | 2004.09.17 - 09:52AM | 2: Lost | Signed |
| Gosh this is really good! I love it. Please post more soon!
Live long and prosper,
Titania |
| snapette82 | 2004.09.17 - 09:05AM | 2: Lost | Signed |
| Good start. Looking forward to what will follow. Have fun with the writing! |
| ancientgirl | 2004.09.17 - 08:53AM | 2: Lost | Anonymous |
| Great start. First Ron is a jerk. Second, its obvious Hermione cares abotu Severus a bit more than she wants to admit to herself, and third, I love unicorns reaction to Severus. LOL, I was beginning to wonder about his virginity until you cleared it up in the end. Its too cute the way they seem to want to follow him about. I'm looking forward to more. Great first effort so far. |
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