Reviews for Naked Journey
June | 2004.10.07 - 02:22PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
THANK YOU for not dragging out the angst! That was a cool trick, having her know how to block an Obliviate without him knowing it. I like the last part, too, about his possessive gesture; VERY sexy and romantic.
Author's Response: Thank you, June! I am particularly fond of that last bit myself. ;) |
CLARALUNA | 2004.10.07 - 02:19PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
Wow, hot as it can be. I need some water please! A little OoC Severus but I guess he is wizard of passions. Great update!
Author's Response: Lol, perhaps he is a bit OOC, but he has been through a lot after all. This naked journey of his isn't just about being nude, it's Severus' little journey of the soul. And it's not over 'till the fat lady sings, folks! I'm afraid he has a few more demons to face. ;) |
June | 2004.10.07 - 02:01PM | 11: Panic and Pain | Anonymous |
FOR EVERYONE LOOKING FOR CHAPTER 11, IT'S HERE:
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com./viewstory.php?sid=7031&a=1
Author's Response: *sigh* |
zambonigirl | 2004.10.07 - 10:23AM | 11: Panic and Pain | Signed |
Ah...you continue to make me happy and proud. Very nice chapter. Good start to my morning.
Author's Response: Thank you, Zambi! It's regular readers like you that keep me writing! :) |
Michelline | 2004.10.07 - 10:06AM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
Wow! For a newbie at writing "racier" fiction, you've done a great job. Whew. I love this story and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so nervous about the whole lemon thing! :) |
Refe | 2004.10.07 - 09:54AM | 10: She Stumbles, He Falls | Anonymous |
I think everyone wants to know what the clock is pointing to right now, and so do I. XD This story is wonderful, as well as incredibly humorous. I kept on laughing at 'Bob the Unicorn'.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! And I swear that clock is stealing the story! :D |
Terra of Slytherin | 2004.10.07 - 09:52AM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
I think you did quite fine with the chapter, Pook. It was incredibly erotic for a smut virgin to write. I am eagerly awaiting for the next chapter to post. I am wondering if Albus' clock will show something to the effect that Hermione and Severus are making love... I wonder what his reaction would be to it? Post soon! ~Terra
Author's Response: Dumbledore's clock is the sole of discetion, luckily Albus is a very clever man! ;) |
Terra of Slytherin | 2004.10.07 - 09:52AM | 9: A Day of Peaceful Plotting | Signed |
I think you did quite fine with the chapter, Pook. It was incredibly erotic for a smut virgin to write. I am eagerly awaiting for the next chapter to post. I am wondering if Albus' clock will show something to the effect that Hermione and Severus are making love... I wonder what his reaction would be to it? Post soon! ~Terra
Author's Response: *Pook giggles* Everyone will get to see Albus' eaction...eventually.
But at the moment we are far too busy with lemony goodness to bother with him. *snicker* |
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