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Reviews for Naked Journey

Jana2004.10.23 - 03:42AM17: InnovationAnonymous
Yay!

Author's Response: *giggle*

PinkTribeChick2004.10.23 - 02:52AM17: InnovationSigned
Wonderful couple of chapters! Glad Severus is well again! And I'm gonna miss this story, too - it rocks! But I will be on the lookout for your next piece! I can't wait for it! Keep up the great work! 8~D

Author's Response: Thank you, darlin'! Your reviews have meant a lot to me! :)

CMW2004.10.22 - 11:29PM17: InnovationAnonymous
This is brilliant - well done! Thank you so much for sharing this little slice of wonderfull.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Tarah Fae2004.10.22 - 04:41PM17: InnovationAnonymous
Yanno... I need to quit university and sit here in front of my computer waiting like a drooling maniac for your updates... because it would be SO worth it! Read your last two chapters this morning and was grinning like an idiot all day. I was like "Oh no you dont Severus Snape - I don't care if you had intimate relations with that wand, you WILL eat it and return to your delicious self!". Excellent lemon (as always) - I've been wondering though.... where does the term "lemon" come from? */off at a tangent* Will be out of town next week, but will be pining for this fic! 9_9

Author's Response: I'm so glad it made you grin! Don't you dare quit university! *giggle* I love your Hermione impression! As for the term "lemon" it comes from the title of an anime called Cream Lemon, which is PWP in animated form. "Lemon" refers to any kind of explicit NC-17 sex in a story. At least, that's what the fanfic glossary sites say! :)

SWEET VIOLET2004.10.22 - 03:40PM17: InnovationSigned
I would have to disagree with the statement that Dirt made in their review about Severus being OCC in this story. Obviously they do not realize how easily "SWEET NOTHINGS" come (?) pouring out when a man is in Love/Lust!!! Seems very true to life to me and believe me, HE can whisper those in my ear ANYTIME!!!!! Well, now that I have set off the sprinklers here at work reading this, I should probably go towel off! Glad I put a plastic bag over my computer so it wouldn't short out huh??? LOL! Seriously tho, loved it as always!

Author's Response: *snicker* Sweetest Violet, you say the nicest things! Glad you took precautions so that your comp could have safe fanfic sex! Wouldn't want the sprinklers to ruin it! *gigglegiggle* I think I'd let that rascal Severus whisper a few things in my ear as well... ;)

Dirt2004.10.22 - 01:02PM17: InnovationAnonymous
I kinda think that Snape is totally OOC in this. Was that intentional? He started off normal, but suddenly he's all "my goddess" and "little one" which strikes me as very un-Snape-like. I also never understood why authors always use the term "Gods" or "Nimue." Anyay, it's not supposed to be a flame, obviously I've read the whole thing.

Author's Response: Lol, no offense taken. He is definately OOC if you take him straight from the books to my final chapter. I did intend to show him changing because of the events in my story. It's not simply a naked journey, but meant to bare his soul a bit as well. To me, I think his character progression throughout the story is justified, but that's completely a matter of opinion. I certainly don't expect everyone to agree with my portrayal. As for the "Nimue"s etc, in my case it's simply to set the tone. Wizards are different than muggles, I would expect them to have some idioms of thier own. *giggle* Glad you read the whole thing, despite my sarcastic romantic Snape.

Author's Response: *giggle* One last thing; do you honestly think a Slytherin does not know how to sweet talk a girl?

Lyndie5782004.10.22 - 12:58PM17: InnovationSigned
(loud sated sigh) Great chapter, how wonderful that they've been reunited! Good for Severus, work can certainly wait!

Author's Response: Lol, I's put off work as long as possible if I was in that position. ;)

Greenleaf2004.10.22 - 12:36PM17: InnovationAnonymous
Love it!!! Update soon please!!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise! :)

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