Reviews for Naked Journey
| Phyllidia | 2014.04.03 - 11:31PM | 2: Lost | Signed |
| Dour potions professor followed by unicorns like little ducklings. PLEASE tell me someone has done some fan art of that! |
| Phyllidia | 2014.04.03 - 11:12PM | 1: The First Step | Signed |
| Nice start. I've read some of your other stuff so it will be interesting to read "the first one". |
| holyflyingpig | 2013.12.09 - 09:55AM | 5: Cavalry of One | Signed |
| I really am enjoying this and impressed at your first attempt at writing fan fiction. My only qualm is Harry telling off Ron with 'Ron Weasley!'. I like that you are developing them differently, however all I could see was Harry turning into Molly, and Ginny. |
| holyflyingpig | 2013.12.09 - 09:55AM | 5: Cavalry of One | Signed |
| I really am enjoying this and impressed at your first attempt at writing fan fiction. My only qualm is Harry telling off Ron with 'Ron Weasley!'. I like that you are developing them differently, however all I could see was Harry turning into Molly, and Ginny. |
| cgeig | 2013.09.28 - 10:14PM | 1: The First Step | Signed |
| I notice this story was written years ago but I hope you get this review
Your story was truly original and amused the heck out of me. I loved it and am impressed by your gifted writing. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2013.02.08 - 05:47AM | 17: Innovation | Signed |
| Thank Heaven! You wonderful author, how could I have forgotten your having said that you believed in happy endings?! (For which I am entirely grateful, since I do, too!) This might've been your first story, but it was well done, and well worth reading, as well as re-reading! Thanks for all your work on it! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2013.02.08 - 05:25AM | 15: Demise | Signed |
| Thank God for Hermione and her fabulous brains! NOW Severus will surely have to be put to rights, right?! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2013.02.08 - 04:58AM | 12: Interlude | Signed |
| "Severus had completely forgotten that, in the heat of passion, he had slipped her wand into his own pocket. It was a mistake he would live to regret bitterly." Oh, NO. That last sentence does not sound good at all. I know I've read this already a few years ago, but having read thousands of chapters of hundreds of stories in the meantime, I can't remember how it turns out. You've got me worried, though. "Regret bitterly" is a very strong phrase, and I'm only hoping they both live through the end of this tale.
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