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Reviews for Naked Journey

Titania2004.10.24 - 01:38PM18: RemembranceAnonymous
~sniff, sniff~ Oh I do so love this story and am sorry to see it end. I am looking forward to your sequel and to reading more of your work! Live long and prosper, Titania

Author's Response: Thank you, Titania. And thank you for your many sweet comments. It's meant a lot to me to have some folks follow my story from the get go, as you have. :)

salena_snape2004.10.24 - 01:05PM18: RemembranceAnonymous
This was just a wonderful story all around. I liked the side of Severus that you have shown us, and how much he cared for Bob. The ending was so sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

aramintasnape2004.10.24 - 12:50PM18: RemembranceAnonymous
This is a wonderful story! I'm really sad it's over and hope you'll write something else soon. The tribute to Bob at the end was really sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! I'm a bit sad it's over as well. *sigh*

Leia2004.10.24 - 07:00AM18: RemembranceAnonymous
Oh Pook that was tremendous. It couldn’t have ended better. The way you brought it all together astounds me. The whole mental picture you get of Severus’s black robes next to the pure white unicorns, who usually prefer the young female virgins…hehehe its so funny and so…just *perfect*. Albus and Minerva giggling on the lawn…lol. It definitely makes me smile. We all really needed closure with Bob and now that Hermione and Sev are together – that was the last thing he needed to do before he could begin his new life with his love. (By the way the sex involving magic was a nice touch :) I foresee a lot of happiness in their future, maybe with a little conflict for plots sake, but there is no one looking forward to a sequel more than me. But I’m also keeping my eyes open for your new fiction. You know how a lot of reviewers say to a first-time fanfic writer “Oooh that was really good for a first attempt!” Well this story was AMAZING for the 9238547 attempt. What I mean to say is, this story was excellent by anyone’s standards. If this was your first shot, good grief woman I can’t wait to read what comes next! I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again: What more could we ask for?? Drama, Conflict, Romance, Lemons, Humor…this story’s got it all. A++++++!! Thank you so much for taking me along on Severus and Hermione’s little adventure. Its one of those stories that will always stick out in my mind as being one of the very best out there. I mean that. I loved every minute.

Author's Response: Wow, Leia. I feel a bit tongue-tied at the moment. Think I might fall back on Severus' patented verbal diversionary tactic and start with "I see...". *snort* I'm so glad you liked my fic, and astounded and pleased by yet another sweet and insightful review. You're an angel to take so much time to tell me what you think. It floors me to hear you say that this is good period, not just for a first attempt. Of course, I lucked into a fantabulous beta, who not only corrected the weird tense troubles I had in the beginning, but patiently taught me how to avoid them. (I have a horrible habit of putting EVERYTHING in past tense when I tell a story, and I didn't even notice!) When I started this fic, I hadn't written anything since college (a dreadfully long time ago. *smirk*) and very little of the writing I did then was creative. So I've been quite floored by the response. Gobsmacked even! It took a whole herd of bravery for me even attempt it in the first place and it's kind readers like you that make me want to keep writing. So my sincerest thanks to you, my dear, for keeping me company on this little journey and for taking the time to tell me what you thought about it along the way. :)

Zara2004.10.24 - 06:16AM18: RemembranceAnonymous
Hi, I have been reading your story as you updataed each chapter. I would like to congratulate you on a beautiful fanfic. I would also like to say that I loved the ending, a memoral scene with almost etheral imagery that will set this fanfic apart. I look forward to your next venture into fanfic. xx zara

Author's Response: Thank you, Zara. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And I'm also glad the end seemed appropriate. It seemed the right way to end it to me, but I wasn't sure what my intrepid readers would think of it. :)

Darque Queen72004.10.24 - 01:16AM18: RemembranceAnonymous
I LOVED this story! If I could, I'd give it a 20! The last part was so wonderful - I most certainly couldn't be Slytherin...I'm too much of a softy. I loved the way your story touched my heart. And the lemony parts were AWESOME as well. Can't wait to see what you do next... D.

Author's Response: DQ, youre the sweetest! Thanks for giving my first fic effort a chance. You rock! :)

JustJeanette2004.10.24 - 01:14AM18: RemembranceSigned
Hermione walked slowly towards the unicorn paddock, a wry grin on her face. Looking up she noticed Severus surronded by his adoring throng and she wondered, not for the first time, if she should be jealous. Instead of giving into a fit of pique though she allowed her sense of the ridiculous to have its way calling out, "Why Severys if I new you wanted to feel 'horny' I would gladly have obliged." Severus, his hand currently engaged in horn holding, for the protection of his clothes (and other vunerable bits), blushed a deep red before ansering back, "I'll show you horny....." Love Jeanette

Author's Response: ROFLMAO! Gods girl, you slay me! You have the most delightfully wicked sense of humor! Thank you for for making me laugh again and again with your fantabulous and entertaining reviews! E-gad, could I use any more explanation points?!!! I tell you, I need a beta for my review responses! Love ya, darlin'! :)

Darque Queen72004.10.24 - 12:57AM18: RemembranceAnonymous
I LOVED this story! If I could, I'd give it a 20! The last part was so wonderful - I most certainly couldn't be Slytherin...I'm too much of a softy. I loved the way your story touched my heart. And the lemony parts were AWESOME as well. Can't wait to see what you do next... D.

Author's Response: Lol, I call myself a Slytherin, but truth is I'm a bit of a softy myself. A sneaky softy, mind you, but still a softy! I'm so glad you enjoyed my story! :)

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