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| pippin | 2004.10.22 - 06:03AM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| Yay! *claps and cheers wildly for the now human professor* That was very good. I love your writing and I hope there is much more, or at least a very satisfactory ending. You are great thank you. Author's Response: Thank you, Pippin! Glad you enjoyed it! :) | |||
| . | 2004.10.22 - 06:01AM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| That is so fabulous look I'm not even a morning person and I got up to read it. so very very worth it. best way to wake up, ever Author's Response: *gigglegiggle* I am not a morning person myself, but here I am, up early to see what you all thought of the new chapter! Glad you liked it! :) | |||
| Clair Snape | 2004.10.22 - 05:57AM | 17: Innovation | Signed |
| Wonderful chapter. Happy to see that Severus is back to his own form. However, the wand has to come out at some point, no? What will happen then? And I loved Severus's letter... Author's Response: Lol! I'm afraid his wand is gone for good, so don't expect to hear more of it. Glad you liked Severus' letter, it makes me giggle! :) | |||
| Becky Benson | 2004.10.22 - 12:50AM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT...WHEW Am so glad Severus is Human again!!! Write More, SOON!!! Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! Last chapter should be up in a couple days. :) | |||
| Imhilien | 2004.10.22 - 12:09AM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| (sighs) Lovely! Author's Response: Thank you! :) | |||
| Maela | 2004.10.22 - 12:08AM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| Yes! Great chapter. I'm glad our potions master is back. :) Author's Response: I am too, he makes a cute unicorn, but he's much sexier as a snarky Professor! :) | |||
| Leeeiiiaaaa | 2004.10.22 - 12:02AM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| Ahahaha YES! HE’S BACK! *does a little jig* These are my favorite parts, followed by my praise:
“Damn. How could he deny her impassioned plea? Blast! He liked that wand; he’d had it since he was a boy. Even if Ollivander said no harm would come to him, he didn’t want his wand destroyed. Fuck! On the other hand, he knew damn well he was running out of time.” I love this little cursing fit, Sev’s having a battle of wits with himself. He’s so cute when he’s indecisive.
“Moving them so that he sat on the rug with Hermione cradled tightly in his arms, Severus rocked her like a child as she wept. He murmured over and over, ‘I’m here, little one, I’m here.’” Ooh Pooka what a perfect moment. I knew Hermione would break down when Severus was returned to her in his human form because she had to keep a smile on her face all week and hide all those emotions and fears…I think it was important for this part to be a purging of both their emotions and you just nailed it.
“It strikes me, Madame, that you are shamefully overdressed for this…reunion. I fear I must trouble you again for the use of your wand, for I seem to have misplaced my own.” AHAHEHEHE!! This has got to be in my top three favorite quotes of the whole bloomin’ story. He has seemed to have misplaced his own!! Aaha…oh man.
And finally, both Albus’ owl and Snape’s reply: “You Bothersome Old Man, I am indeed quite…busy. I trust I can rely on you to keep teaching my classes at present. I intend to be busy for some time and do not wish to be disturbed. Severus” I loved. Especially the bit about how Sev intends on being busy for some time. Lol, just perfect. And finally they made use of that lovely bed of his.
My only qualm is that its ending soon *tear*. I suppose all good things must come to an end but I’m thankful there’s one more chapter left, and wait for it with baited breath! ;) Author's Response: Leia you are an absolute delight. Thank you for posting such detailed comments. I got to tell you, you picked perhaps my favorite moment in the whole story, when Severus holds Hermione while she cries. I'm glad that part didn't go amiss, because it was important to me. You also picked my favorite funny moments. I'm sorry this story is ending as well, but I wanted it to go out with a "bang", so to speak. *wicked smirk*. I think you'll get a kick out of the next chapter as well. I can't wait to hear what you think of it! :) | |||
| DADA_Mistress | 2004.10.21 - 11:56PM | 17: Innovation | Anonymous |
| LOL! THIS IS THE BEST!!!! I love that chapter! Of course, my favorite part was the letters! That's so great Snape called him "You Bothersome Old Man!" LOL! Translation for Dumbledore's letter: "Severus, it says 'NAKED TIME' on my clock!"
Translation for Snape's letter: "Damn right it does, you nosey old coot! If you know what's good for ya, you'll leave us the hell alone!" Tee hee! Wonderful! Write on! :D
Author's Response: Oh my....can't type...giggling...fiance thinks I've run mad...*gigglegigglegiggle* I think I prefer your wicked translations to the original! ROFLMAO! :) | |||
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