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| MoonAssassin | 2004.10.11 - 10:44PM | 1: | Anonymous |
| OMG!They just never get a break,do they? Please don't let them die! Not after they confessed their love for each other! By the way, I loved the part where Severus transformed. I actually was thinking about a black unicorn being his animagus form after I had read the first few chapters of your story! Please update soon! Author's Response: They will not die, dearest, I promise. | |||
| June | 2004.10.11 - 10:43PM | 1: | Anonymous |
| Ch 13 - what do you mean, "no character death in this fic" - YOU KILLED BOB! [You didn't think I'd forget that, did you?] And BTW, this is ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER. So, Severus can't transform back to himself without a wand? Like someone is going to give a wand to a unicorn? Sigh...why do I ask for more chapters of this torture... Author's Response: Really? Did I write two cliffies in a row? I hadn't noticed! *Pook smiles in a benign and innocent fashion* Bob doesn't count, I made him, I can take him out! *muahahaha!* You rock June, I hope you stick with it! More torture approaches.... | |||
| Ezmerelda | 2004.10.11 - 04:45PM | 12: Interlude | Signed |
| Oh, no! They face a minotaur and Hermione's wand is in Severus' pocket!
With only three miles to go, could Hagrid stumble upon them and help them escape?
Great story, I love the interlude showing Dumbledore following the saga by way of the clock, especially the sudden attack of chuckles!
Thanks for writing! ~"~ Author's Response: Glad you are getting a kick out of it! Hagrid may indeed have his part to play, but not all dangers can be avoided. :) | |||
| Lyndie578 | 2004.10.11 - 01:57PM | 12: Interlude | Signed |
| Oh, my goodness! Hermione is not going to get hurt or worse is she? Author's Response: Never fear, not 'worse' at any rate! :) | |||
| Invisible Voice | 2004.10.11 - 11:22AM | 12: Interlude | Signed |
| yaaaagh. cliffie! now you need to update really really quickly.... Author's Response: Soon, quite soon. I promise. :) | |||
| WriterLady1031 | 2004.10.11 - 10:44AM | 12: Interlude | Signed |
| Once again, great story! I really liked what you did in chapter eleven. The inner struggle that they both had with themselves and the situation was a great insight into how they were trying to deal with their new relationship. I also liked chapter twelve because they talked about their feelings somewhat and he revealed his sad experience with Bob. (I was sad when Bob died too!) Then, they bit about Albus laughing was really funny and I wanted to say the idea with the clock-watching is very creative. Finally, the twist at the end just made the story better. You know, they're almost there and safe but not quite yet. Great story! Author's Response: Thank you, darlin'. I admit my plans for Naked Journey were not only about Severus having to bare his body, but to also force him to bare his soul a bit as well. I'm glad you've enjoyed that part of it. :) | |||
| Leia | 2004.10.11 - 03:27AM | 12: Interlude | Anonymous |
| Oooh how could you leave us in such suspense?? Loved both new chapters. Splendid work and I loved the expression-faces on Dumbledore's clock. My favorite line of this last chapter has to be, “And just where do you think you are going, professor of mine? I have many plans for you!” Haha I had to giggle out loud when reading this little waking-up scene. Hurry and update dear Pooka; we are eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s). ;) Author's Response: Thank you, Leia! That line makes me giggle too! :) | |||
| Carol | 2004.10.11 - 12:13AM | 12: Interlude | Anonymous |
| As always, I enjoy your work very much. The whimsy mixes well with the moments of suspense you add. I loved Albus’ response to the clock. I do hope he hasn’t seen their facial expressions while they are in the throes of passion though… hmm… speaking of which, I am so enjoying the lemony-goodness. Thanks for writing. Your creativity is refreshing. Author's Response: Thank you Carol! :) | |||
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