Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Plebia | 2007.10.07 - 05:54PM | 2: A Suitable Candidate | Signed |
| The sequence of events is plausible and well thought out, but Severus's proposal is simply absurd, and makes no sense whatsoever. I'd advise rewriting it a bit. |
| geordiegirl89 | 2007.07.19 - 02:19AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| this is great is there another story to this one like a ummm wachacallit? well it was great!! it seems like u left this huge ciff at the end..... but i like it
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| Zvezdana | 2007.07.09 - 04:56PM | 2: A Suitable Candidate | Signed |
| I have rarely seen such horrendous out of character writing |
| vaila | 2007.06.16 - 04:54PM | 12: Fulfilment | Signed |
| I liked the passion in this chapter. It is pity that they mainly blame it on the spell on them. |
| campinas13 | 2007.06.10 - 03:55PM | 1: Prologue- A New Law. | Signed |
| An "ill-conceived" marriage law? Sorry, I just cracked up. Whether intentional or not, very funny. |
| ladymalfoy1 | 2007.05.24 - 05:13PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| una novella muy buena!! |
| brainorgan | 2007.04.15 - 09:26PM | 19: Professor Snape | Signed |
| This is an EXCELLENT development!! I know you wrote this ages ago, sorry, it's my first time reading it! |
| sinbad | 2006.09.25 - 09:01PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| I loved this story and would love to read its companion piece can you tell me the name of it? |
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