Reviews for Marriage Vows
| droxy | 2004.06.23 - 12:39PM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| who wouldn't fall for this chivalrous Severus? |
| Emma L. | 2004.06.23 - 11:57AM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| I read the last two chapters together and they were excellent. |
| Systor | 2004.06.23 - 11:49AM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| Yay. Great chapter. I'm sure Severus isn't going to be calm forever. ;) |
| Chantal | 2004.06.23 - 11:48AM | 14: Showing Affection | Signed |
| I am really enjoying this story! I loved your version of their binding both publicly and privately. Their moments in the bedroom were really beautiful. I am glad that they are connected and growing closer. I am wondering about this "relation" of Severus' who mysteriously looks like his dead wife. She died twenty years ago and this girl is eleven... It's just my opinion, but I really hope she is not somehow the lost daughter of Olivia and Severus. It just seems like it would steal Severus' heart to have this unbelieveable link to his first wife. You probably already have your plot planned, but I just thought I'd share. |
| Olivia | 2004.06.23 - 11:43AM | 14: Showing Affection | Signed |
| RON RON RON!poor guy ...but lovely chapter.I love how she stood her groung and toled Snape how she felt...we all nee to do that ...lol more updates to come i bet!!!:):):) |
| Carol | 2004.06.23 - 11:31AM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| aww! Poor ron... great chapter! |
| Olivia | 2004.06.23 - 11:25AM | 13: In the Morning | Signed |
| hey it's no trouble ! lol
Wonderful as always i really want to see this girls family. well more for me to go ponder ..*hugs* |
| Daintress | 2004.06.23 - 11:04AM | 14: Showing Affection | Signed |
| Took me a while to read through all of that, but it was very good. I find Snape to be oddly formal, but perhaps you feel that when he is uncomfortable (which would be all the time in a situation like this one) he reverts to a more formal mode of speech. It is very well written, and your diaglogue is interesting. I like the character you've made in Charlie's wife, and I'm very curious about the muggleborn Slytherin. Keep up the good work! |
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