Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Wine witch | 2016.06.13 - 01:37AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Even though a gentle, friendly Severus is very ooc, a very interesting story. Thank you! |
| barton | 2015.10.15 - 09:02PM | 11: Blood Kin | Signed |
| I like the character of Maria. She's intriguing, and it is nice for SS to have 'family' at the wedding. It'll certainly make it easier for Maria to get respect in Slytherin if she is related to him. |
| amastarswati | 2015.05.31 - 12:23AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Firstly dear, thanks a ton for this awesome story. It's lovely with fresh characterizations. I just loved it. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. I loved the abruptness of their love for one another as they have been around each other for years and the last year had been spent around each other in closer quarters than it was normal for them to fall for each other. |
| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.12 - 06:58PM | 27: Sunday Lunch | Signed |
| “Well we already know Mrs Abbott had an Obliviate. We assumed it was because she was present when the babies were swapped. What if Selene swapped the babies while she was in the loo or something? She would have had time to choose her moment. On the other hand Lucius had to be in and out very quickly and had to kill Selene before she could strike at him. She could have been there at the time.”
but that would mean that Lucius knew that Selene was pregnant with his fathers baby (and that she was married to his father) and that he HAD the baby!!!! did he maybe know about the switch?? |
| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.12 - 04:37PM | 22: The Hearing | Signed |
| WOW Ws severus gay at one point or is severus bisexual?? And is he still bi sexual or is he STRAIGHT??
“At Hogwarts when I went to school.”
“Were you friends?”
“Yes.”
“Lovers?”
“Yes.”
Hermione was flabbergasted at his admission. She wished she had known about this. She wished he was not blindfolded and drugged so she could get more of an idea of the emotions that should go along with this telling.
“At what point did you become lovers?”
“When I was thirteen.”
“And when did you stop?”
“We did not carry on a regular relationship after he left school when I was seventeen.”
“But when did you last have sexual relations with Lucius Malfoy?”
“We had an encounter last year after Lucius had escaped Azkaban. I was spying for the Order and I was not in a position to refuse. I have not made love with him of my own volition since I was nineteen.”
“What are your feelings towards him now?”
“I hate him.”
“What led you to hate your lover?”
“I think he killed my first wife. I witnessed him commit countless acts of violence when I was a spy. He tried to kill me and I think he wanted to kill Hermione.”
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| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.12 - 04:14PM | 22: The Hearing | Signed |
| Madam Pomfrey had confirmed her pregnancy that afternoon and she longed to be in her husband’s arms once again. So far only Poppy and Minerva knew of her condition, as Hermione wanted Severus to know before it became common knowledge.
AND YET SHE CONFERMED IT TO ALBUS AND ATHER BEFORE SHE TOLD SEVERUS AND THE COURT ARE ABOUT TO HEAR IT BEFORE SEVERUS DOES!!! WHAT I HORRIBLE WAY TO FIND OUT YOUR WIFE IS PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!! SAME FOR HERMIONE WHEN THAT HEALER TOLD HER LIKE THAT LIKE IT’S A VURSE SHE IS PREGNANT!!! HOPE THEY FIRE THAT HEALER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“Molly’s pregnant?” said Hermione.
“Don’t tell Molly I said. She wants to tell you herself when she gets here. We’re gathering up at Hogsmeade tonight to break it to the family. You and Severus are welcome to join us. Unless of course you’d rather be celebrating alone,” he grinned.
“I’m pregnant too. It was confirmed yesterday. Severus knows I could be but I haven’t sent word yet.”
“Congratulations Hermione. You’ll make wonderful parents.” He gave her a hug and a peck on the cheek.
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| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.11 - 10:26PM | 19: Professor Snape | Signed |
| before they went uo to snape office didnt hermione close the connecting door from the class room to the lab before they went into severus office?? And what about the potions they were making for Remus? if severus is imprisoned then we will be an able to finish the potions!!!??
Hermione was working in the private workroom off the lab on an essay for Severus outlining the theory behind the Wolfsbane potion. The connecting door was open so she could hear what was going on but could not be seen. The two copper cauldrons lay on the far table waiting for the final touches that evening. Severus and Hermione were expecting Remus to call in for it the next day. So far Hermione’s potion was proceeding correctly and in theory the final stage was simpler than most of those she had already completed.
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| snapefan1983 | 2014.08.11 - 06:44PM | 12: Fulfilment | Signed |
| HE SHOULD HAVE CARRIED HER IN OVER THE THRESHOLD EVEN IF IT ISNT A WIZARDING TRADITION, HE SHOULD STILL HAVE DONE IT FOR HERMIONE’S SAKE!!!! Severus went down on one knee in front of his bride and asked the final question,
“Hermione, wife of my blood, will you consent to fulfil our bond by taking your place in my home and in my bed so we may be truly joined?”
She knelt before him and gave him both of her hands before replying,
“I will.”
The dome of light span around them as they knelt and the light poured from the top of the dome into their bodies until they had absorbed it and it radiated from their skins.
Standing Severus led Hermione into his rooms. They went straight towards the bedroom door. Severus opened it and muttered a charm to light the numerous candles arrayed around the room. Hermione gasped at the beauty of the room. Some effort had obviously gone into preparing it for her./THEM!!!
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