Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Sooyoung | 2004.06.23 - 10:16AM | 13: In the Morning | Anonymous |
| Great job so far, I really like the story. Please keep writing ^_^ |
| Systor | 2004.06.23 - 09:27AM | 13: In the Morning | Anonymous |
| I love this story! |
| Crashley | 2004.06.23 - 12:06AM | 13: In the Morning | Anonymous |
| Loving your story!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what's up with Miss Abbott and Why Lucius wanted Hermione... Post more soon please :) |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.23 - 12:02AM | 13: In the Morning | Anonymous |
| I like how you have several mysteries and perhaps even an adventure or two set up for the foreground or the background as you can continue to tell the story of the early married days for Severus and Hermione, and perhaps even take them through her senior year.... and beyond. |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.22 - 11:48PM | 12: Fulfilment | Anonymous |
| I thought this chapter was pretty good, though it seemed to have one foot in "R" and one foot in "NC-17" I liked the relationshp aspect of it a lot. |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.22 - 11:31PM | 11: Blood Kin | Anonymous |
| Cool chapter. The only thing that would have made it better would be a slowed down description of the wedding kiss, rather than just it happened and was good for the audience. |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.22 - 11:23PM | 10: Marital Advice | Anonymous |
| The Malfoy connection for miss Maria was somewhat unexpected. Only some how I feel that your female secondary characters are sometimes tugging into the direction of Mary Sues by taking over the story-- but it is a fine line -- and you are still managing to get back to the main characters and keep the story interesting. |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.22 - 11:11PM | 9: Doing the Muggle Thing | Anonymous |
| any chance that Miss Abbott the younger was meant to be a distraction to get to Hermione, but the pureblood students didn't count on the "Hen" party with capable adults present?
Syltherin are ambitious and sneaky.... but on face value, also quite interesting. |
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