Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Zenobia | 2006.06.27 - 01:21AM | 16: Investigations | Signed |
| Well,that''s the problem the wizardworld can see muggle's as people that love hopes. you can tolerated mugglewictches and wizards not muggles. they see them like houseelfs. |
| WitchatHeart77 | 2006.06.12 - 02:54AM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| Just came across this from a friend's faves list... I'm absolutely laughing hysterically over this prenancy boom.... this is great!! This story is wonderful as it has all the elements... action, angst, humor, romance. It's great... Alas, my husband is home from work and he needs the computer, so I have to finish tomorrow... *insert loud wail here*... I'll finish tomorrow! |
| sleepygirl68 | 2006.06.10 - 02:35AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| I really enjoyed this story! Great writing. Story has good flow.
Thanks! |
| Arime Setta | 2006.05.22 - 12:02AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Wonderful. Even with the kinks I pointed out earlier I loved it. Great twists on the Marriage challenge and wonderful novel over all. Bravo. |
| Arime Setta | 2006.05.21 - 11:16PM | 25: Shell Shocked | Signed |
| So, I've loved the story thus far and I know you're done already but i have to comment on this chapter. The stuff with the three girls is really disturbing. Besides the idea of whoring out girls, Snape's reaction is terrible. You seem to want the reader to know the girls are under another's influence and innocent and yet Snape is completely treating them like trash and Hermione is ok with it. It seems very odd for Hermione to let Snape treat them like they are whoring themselves and are not worthy of being slytherin... Otherwise I've loved the story and have really enjoyed it. |
| BotticellisAngel | 2006.05.21 - 10:23AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| What a wonderful story! I will admit that the part about Lucius wanting to eat Hermione's heart right out of her chest made me a little ill; but I think it was also a good idea, since it showed the depth of feeling that Severus had for her. I also liked little Maria a lot, and I loved your Draco. I did think the beginning was a bit hasty; but now that I have finished the story, I see that you wanted to keep things off balance for them the whole time. I can't wait to read the next installment! |
| loony_old_fan | 2006.05.19 - 03:44PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Excellent story I just wish it didn't go so fast. |
| brenamarie | 2006.05.12 - 10:36AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| This was such a wonderful story. I can't get over how happy I was to come across it. I really loved how they actually had a "happy" marriage, one of understanding and companionship... I loved how the "issues" in the story weren't the two of them bickering but with stuff like Maria and the pregnancies....tie truly was amazing. Thank you! ~Brena |
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