Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Kellie | 2004.06.26 - 02:42PM | 20: Family Loyalty | Anonymous |
| Gads, I was pissed at Ron, though I knew he would do something stupind! I hope you put up another chapter soon |
| Iamtired | 2004.06.26 - 02:19PM | 20: Family Loyalty | Signed |
| An amazing story. One the best answers to the challenge that I have seen. I was wondering if you had submitted it at WIKTT. I don't remember seeing it. You should. I really enjoy the pacing of the story and how everything is coming together. I has been so pleasant reading a story that is perfect with canon. Can't wait to read the rest. |
| Floris | 2004.06.26 - 02:01PM | 20: Family Loyalty | Anonymous |
| That was a horrible thing for Ron to do. But I can really picture him doing that in that situation. Especially if he knew he had Percy on the inside, so to speak. |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.26 - 01:48PM | 20: Family Loyalty | Signed |
| Again, overall a very cool chapter. I want you to think back to when you were eleven years old. If an adult gave you a long, complicated explanation that included death threats, how would you react? How much would you understand? Even if you had the brains of a ravenclaw.
Think about perhaps dramatizing some of that angst in body language or show that perhaps the child understand enough of what is going on to be circumspect but not everything. |
| Daintress | 2004.06.26 - 12:53PM | 20: Family Loyalty | Anonymous |
| Oh Ron's really put his foot in it this time, hasn't he? I bet Dumbledore's feeling stupid for not taking Severus' concern about him seriously, too. Another interesting chapter. Looking forward to more! |
| pseudonym | 2004.06.26 - 11:15AM | 20: Family Loyalty | Anonymous |
| I think your story is fabulous and addictive. I also think that you update at a good rate. As all other readers, I wish you could update faster, but twice a day is dramatically better than some authors who update once or twice a week. I am enthralled in your story and I would love to hear some about Hermione serving as Head of Slytherin and/or Severus' experiences in his Ministry confines. |
| Systor | 2004.06.26 - 10:29AM | 20: Family Loyalty | Anonymous |
| Argh! Somebody really needs to kick Ron's butt. |
| hermsnapefan | 2004.06.26 - 01:15AM | 19: Professor Snape | Anonymous |
| This is by far one of the best marriage challenge fics that I've read. It is one of my favorites. Please keep updating as I am always looking for more to read. |
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