Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Village Mystic | 2004.07.05 - 09:18PM | 31: The Trial | Anonymous |
| not a disapointing chapter. I took my time reading it and got logged out! Very dramatic in a good way. And let me add to my previous chapter's comment - "Diagnosis Magic" ? |
| Village Mystic | 2004.07.05 - 08:20PM | 30: Conversation | Signed |
Again, sorry the story will be ending so soon. Perhaps a future adventure or two or problem with a mystery story or series of stories with Snape as a consultant to the Aurors ("Murder he Cast"?) and Hermione's muggle knowledge being helpful from time to time.
I really enjoyed the give and take of the conversation. |
| Eternal Queen | 2004.07.05 - 07:35PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| Wonderful. I confess that I did not read this story, although I saw it in the 'recently added' section many times, because of some minor style problems that turned me off. However, I tried again today, and I was hooked- your story line, although not original (of course), was well written, and the calm beauty of the conversations, although unrealistic, added a sense of etherealism to the whole thing. Good job, overall...
However, I must complain about the one thing that really bothered me throughout this story- you had extended conversations between two people with no dialogue tags. I would really prefer to see some emotion, some times...that it...
"Hello Severus," said Hermione.
"My love!"
"What?!?!" she gasped.
He looked away, blushing. "Oops, wrong fic."
This kind of conversation would be much, much easier to read than just straight quotations.
That is my only complaint. Other than that, keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more beautiful work from you. |
| MelissaAdams | 2004.07.04 - 11:07AM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| Its crazy to think that it could end here, so I hope it wont. This was a great story, fully worth a 10 rating. :)
M.A. |
| meredithsg | 2004.07.04 - 09:51AM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| I loved this story. So much so that I had to join the site so I could keep watch for the next part. Keep up the good work. |
| Systor | 2004.07.04 - 07:36AM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| I'm so sad to see this end, but I'm looking forward to the sequel. This is one of the stories that I have checked multiple times a day to see if there was an update. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. |
| Eris Anglachel | 2004.07.04 - 04:37AM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| Whee! for FertilityGoddess!Hermione. (and Severus of course, lol) I was rolling on the floor when I read this chapter. (this is a great story, by the way. I'm sorry I haven't been feeling up to leaving you a review for every single chapter) |
| Nataly Ravenlock | 2004.07.03 - 10:40PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Yay! A sequel! I'm very excited, but I need sleep, so I will leave you at that! |
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