Reviews for Marriage Vows
| pseudonym | 2004.07.03 - 10:16PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| Wow, your story has been incredible. I really don't know what I'll do now since I won't be checking twice a day for a new chapter. In typical fashion, I must say that you didn't address the topic of the pregnancies and finalize that facet of the story. That part was a bit of a let down; it seemed as though this incredible event was just a sidenote. I must now request that you might write a sequel maybe set a couple of year or so in the future, describing how it is with all these kids running around Hogwarts (plus Hermione and Severus as parents would be quite entertaining. Some followup on Draco would be nice too, this story was just so sad for him. I'd like to see him find a nice girl. |
| MB | 2004.07.03 - 09:31PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| This is an excellent story. I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel and associated stories. Lovely work. |
| severessa | 2004.07.03 - 07:00PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| This is a beautiful story! I have it on my favorites list and I intend to read it several more times for the fun of it. Thank you very much!! |
| Moyra | 2004.07.03 - 06:18PM | 29: Potions Class | Anonymous |
| First I have to say that I like your story. Although I have to admit that I found the atidute of Severus difficult that he would not give the possibility to the young women or girls to make their own decision if they want to continue or finish their pragnancy. No woman and almost no girl should be forced to get a child which they do not really want to. If he had not held back a potion for this fact or if Pomfrey would have offered it to the girls there would not have been the need for the dead-dangerous potion which Zabini brought to Hogwarts.
And I also find him very cruel to Draco telling him details of the plans of Lucius for Hermione...
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| Ezmerelda | 2004.07.03 - 05:42PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| I'd be feeling maudlin if I didn't know there was a sequel coming, I've enjoyed reading this so much!
Thanks for writing! ~"~ |
| Ezmerelda | 2004.07.03 - 05:38PM | 31: The Trial | Signed |
| Woo hoo! What an exciting chapter! I think it's rather sweet that it was Mrs. Abbott that comforted Draco after he learned that Lucius had, indeed, killed Narcissa.
On to the next exciting chapter, and one step closer to what promises to be a great sequel... |
| Kateri | 2004.07.03 - 05:15PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| I really loved this story! My only compalint is that it is over. I cannot wait for the squel and hopefully seeing Hermione and Severus cope with a baby that is bound to have exordinary abilities considering his/her parentage. I am also curious what will happen with all the other couples (especially Ron and Susan) as well as Draco and the Abbots. |
| HarryPotterSNL | 2004.07.03 - 04:50PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| I really liked the end, though I wish it wasn't the end. It was very sweet and you are such a wonderful writer. |
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