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| Shanna | 2004.06.27 - 09:42PM | 24: Revelations | Anonymous |
| Well. That's an interesting side effect. And certainly one way to guarantee a post war baby boom. Not that there wouldn't be one anyway, statistically. This is a great story, and I'm sorry I didn't review before. Can't wait to find out what happens next, and it looks as though we'll be seein a lot of red-heads in eleven years. Maybe a story about the children of the current characters when you finish this one? But that's entirely up to you. Bravo for a great story! | |||
| Aine Rowan | 2004.06.27 - 09:36PM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| I really like your idea on the effects of the binding magic. I am enjoying the story. And I am so grateful that you update with more than one chapter at a time. | |||
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.27 - 09:25PM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| Wow. Okay, good example of give and take conversation in an appropriate place with Severus and Hermione's dad. Nice example of comfort and moving on (though I'm tired enough that part of that particular plot point might be in the previous chapter. Cool new plot twist. Let me say why I don't agree with your reviewer of the previous chapter who thought you brought Severus and Hermione out of character. I think you established enough in your story - which is after all a future fic - that the characters acted appropriate to what you have established in your story. Other readers, please do recall that Severus is at least 40 in this story (if not older if you go by Allan Rickman's appearence). An encounter by choice and experimentation with Lucius would have been 15 to 20 plus years previous. If you wish consider their so called open mindedness an aspect of the "R" rating. | |||
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.27 - 09:10PM | 23: Recovering | Signed |
| Most excellent chapter (sorry nothing constructive tihs time, lol!). Anyhow, I have the small energy to spare, and your work is entertaining me. I know my reviews can sometimes come across as "beta comments," but I have many moods... and at least half of them include writer solidarity. Best and thanks! | |||
| magickal | 2004.06.27 - 09:08PM | 23: Recovering | Anonymous |
| I feel that Hermione and Severus are OOC. It's a decent story, but Severus seems far too...accepting, and I really can't see him as being all lovey-dovey after so little time, and Hermione is practically on Valium, she isn't the least bit upset he was whoring for Lucius, or that he had a first wife and frequently discusses her? Next time, try and stay true to Hermione and Severus as characters. | |||
| Sooyoung | 2004.06.27 - 08:42PM | 24: Revelations | Anonymous |
| omg... this just gets better and better! | |||
| Caitlin | 2004.06.27 - 07:33PM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| please hurry and post the rest of this. i love the twists and turns. can't wait to see where this latest leads. | |||
| Emma L. | 2004.06.27 - 07:18PM | 23: Recovering | Anonymous |
| I just read the last 3 chapters. They are great. Update soon. | |||
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