Reviews for Marriage Vows
| bary | 2004.07.01 - 01:50PM | 30: Conversation | Anonymous |
| just great! keep writing! |
| Daintress | 2004.07.01 - 08:32AM | 29: Potions Class | Anonymous |
| Really, it's amazing that no one had to pull Ron's itchy fingers off Blaise's throat for the death of his own child. I think his little speech showed a great deal of restraint - nearly as much as Severus used in not punishing him. Keep up the good work! |
| Systor | 2004.07.01 - 12:21AM | 29: Potions Class | Anonymous |
| There's so many twists and turns in this story. I really look forward to the updates each day. Keep up the good work. |
| Sooyoung | 2004.06.30 - 09:25PM | 29: Potions Class | Anonymous |
| Bravo. |
| lunziek | 2004.06.30 - 09:24PM | 29: Potions Class | Signed |
I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work. I'll admit that the style isn't quite how I would have written it, but then neither is the idea. *grins* Anyway, love the story, glad you're updating so frequently, just wish that they came even quicker.
Author's Response: My main area of interest in writing is screenplays. I don't post in that format but my other fiction is mainly to practice conveying character and plot through dialogue. That is why I choose to limit description to character movements and have almost no tracking of thought processes which are a main thread of most fanfiction. |
| Ellopoe | 2004.06.30 - 06:02PM | 28: Gathering the Evidence | Signed |
| I like this fic. I like how Draco wasn't screaming, and how he trusts Dear Sevvie. I wished that you had told him about Maria but i suppose you will eventually. He'll probably be ashamed, and ask for forgiveness, or just say he was sorry. but that would be weird. anyhow. i can't wait until you update, i just started reading it this morning. PLEASE update soon. ta ta!!!!!!!! =) |
| Ezmerelda | 2004.06.30 - 02:56PM | 28: Gathering the Evidence | Signed |
| Well, that's heartening. Perhaps Draco can be saved after all.
I would love to read about his meeting with Tonks (if it ever happens) - although, being Draco, he may not be very impressed with her if she trips over a chair or something. But it does have the potential for a little comic relief.
Thanks for writing! ~"~ |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.30 - 10:59AM | 29: Potions Class | Signed |
| Brilliant plotting and good dialog throughout this chapter. I read it in two sittings. |
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