Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Natalie | 2004.06.23 - 10:49PM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| OMG this fic is AWESOME!!!! i love it please update soon! i can't wait for the next chappie. well ttyl, and keep up the good work, it rocks! |
| HarryPotterSNL | 2004.06.23 - 08:05PM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| I love how you show Hermione and Severus growing closer! it's absolutely one of the sweetest things! I can't wait to find out more of the Abbot girl and I want more H/S fluff please!!! |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.23 - 07:36PM | 15: Diagon Alley | Signed |
| This was an amazing chapter! Coming of age moments - adult moments, forward plot moments and characterization moments. Brava! |
| greg | 2004.06.23 - 03:20PM | 15: Diagon Alley | Anonymous |
| Nice fic! I like it alot! Keep going |
| Lyndie578 | 2004.06.23 - 02:25PM | 14: Showing Affection | Signed |
| The tide is turning. Hopefully Severeus will become less clinical in his relationship/communication with Hermione. She's rather bright, so hopefully they'll start to become less formal around each other. Is Ron going to cause a big problem, or is that a Red Herring? What will happen when Draco returns to school? Will it be easier for Draco to get to Hermione since she will be spending more time in the dungeons or more difficult because she's living with Severus? Will Draco even try to get at her? And why do Lucius and Draco want her--does Draco know why they were pursuing her? Will any of these questions be answered? Thanks for the frequent updates and please post again soon! |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.23 - 01:19PM | 14: Showing Affection | Signed |
| Quite wonderful, intelligent, mature, thoughtful and entertaining in a chapter. I liked Severus showing his reservations over Hermione speaking about him and her way of being addressed. I thought the "and then they spent the morning in bed" was somewhat G or PG, but it might have had to have been two chapters if you further dramitzed. The pacing was pretty good over all. |
| Meg | 2004.06.23 - 01:14PM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| I really like how you're handling this. It's not the two of them at each other's throats, it's not unbelievably gushy, it's just two reasonably mature people treating this with the care and respect that it deserves. It's been quite fun to read and I look forward to the next installment. |
| divagoddess | 2004.06.23 - 01:07PM | 14: Showing Affection | Anonymous |
| This fic ROCKS!
Thank you so much for updating so quickly!!
It makes me smile! :) |
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