Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.08.01 - 12:34AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Good story! I will look for your sequel. Thanks for all your work. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.30 - 01:51AM | 25: Shell Shocked | Signed |
| I don't think Severus is treating the girls like trash. I think he is horrified by what they've been forced into, and is much more disturbed and disgusted by their parents. He wants to protect them from their parents. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.30 - 01:40AM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| "She has more raw power now than I do. Possibly more than Dumbledore or even Flamel." Sorry. I'll buy nearly everything else you've written about the binding influencing Hermione's powers, but not that. Hermione with more raw power than Severus? Again: sorry, I just can't buy that. Excellent chapter, though--and I do love the abundance of fecundity! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.30 - 01:17AM | 23: Recovering | Signed |
| "That business with Umbridge was their finest hour. I’m not saying they never annoyed me but they were bloody funny.” So nice to know Severus appreciated the twins! I liked this whole exchange. I'm glad Severus is back home with Hermione where he belongs.
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| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.30 - 12:37AM | 20: Family Loyalty | Signed |
| “Please bear in mind that any indiscretion in this matter may result in serious consequences.” Oh, come on, Dumbledore! Ron's indiscretion is right in front of you, and you STILL trust him not to spill any further beans?! Not to mention put 'Miss Abbott' in further possible harms way due to that indiscreet carrot-top? Jeez Louise!! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.27 - 04:44AM | 12: Fulfilment | Signed |
| I bet the majority of women wish they could have Hermione's ease of orgasm during their first times! Spell or not, that's how you could tell this was truly a work of fiction! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.27 - 04:12AM | 11: Blood Kin | Signed |
| Very lovely ceremony. You did a nice job with this chapter. I like Miss Abbott, too. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2012.07.27 - 03:23AM | 9: Doing the Muggle Thing | Signed |
| ‘Always calm ‘em,’ and ‘try stroking ‘em.’ This is actually quite good advice! I'm enjoying this story, even if Severus does seem a little too good to be true. |
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