Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Nataly Ravenlock | 2004.06.25 - 12:52PM | 18: The Family Tree | Signed |
| I still like my idea of the parentage better. it would have made a good twist in the tale, but that's alright, this works too. I'd like to see how Lucius deals with it. Great job, as always! |
| Emma L. | 2004.06.25 - 11:54AM | 18: The Family Tree | Anonymous |
| Wow. That was not what I was expecting. But great as always. What happens to Maria? Update soon. |
| Olivia | 2004.06.25 - 10:36AM | 18: The Family Tree | Anonymous |
| oKokokokokok! i see now! wonderful chapter they are soo sweet with each other .*hugs* as always |
| lucab_69 | 2004.06.25 - 09:41AM | 18: The Family Tree | Anonymous |
| i like this story and im glad maria didn't turn out to be Severus' daughter with olivia somehow...that was my only problem with this story and im glad you caught me by suprise |
| Sooyoung | 2004.06.25 - 09:32AM | 18: The Family Tree | Anonymous |
| Absolutely amazing. 'Nuff said. |
| mada | 2004.06.25 - 07:36AM | 3: Decisions | Anonymous |
| Ch. 1
I just don't know about it. Severus seems so autocratic and Herm sounds like a very young child. The dialogue feels manufactured.
O, I don't know, it's probably just me....I've read so many of these marriage law fics that they all feel the same! |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.24 - 11:39PM | 17: Trouble Brewing | Signed |
| Well, it is lovely to see the early days of a equitable and romantic relationship proceed. They have the added burdon of having been forced to the marriage stage early, but with the great possibilty that the marriage law will be repealed in favor of a marraige incentive (rather than a law), the plot could possibly go anywhere.
I'm not sure if I see the necessity for Maria to be adopted into the Snape family formerly in the story, thoug I am curious if Narcissa or Lucius is one of her parents.
I would like to see Hermione and Snape go to a muggle movie during the story, and perhaps have a scene where Hermione stops a street crime of some sort while they are still in the muggle part of town, but that's just a "what if" that might fit into the story as you are developing the characters, rather than something I'd actually expect. |
| Systor | 2004.06.24 - 10:31PM | 17: Trouble Brewing | Anonymous |
| Ugh! Ron is driving me a little crazy. This is a great story though. I'm really enjoying seeing their relationship develop. |
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