Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Systor | 2004.06.28 - 12:36PM | 24: Revelations | Anonymous |
| Holy Cow! I have a feeling we're going to see a huge baby boom! :) |
| Chantal | 2004.06.28 - 09:37AM | 24: Revelations | Anonymous |
| Very interesting twist making all the women present at the binding pregnant! I'm curious what'll mean and what it'll lead to. I thought your "man-to-man" talk between Severus and his father-in-law was well done. I think it was wise for Severus to be candid. I guess we know where Hermione gets her notion for open acceptance without a second thought. |
| Chantal | 2004.06.28 - 09:13AM | 23: Recovering | Anonymous |
| I'm really enjoying this story and I like how you have the Ministry fearing Severus' power, but your portrayal of Hermione is bit unbelievable. She is way too accepting... She has no wavering feelings about finding out that her husband is bisexual? That he was lovers (in love with?) the man who tried to kill them both... Then he keep referring to his late wife with such longing, first with Maria and then when talking about holding a pregnant wife. It's all too much! I can't see any woman, much less a hormonal pregnant woman being so blase' about such big issues. She doesn't have to have jealous fits, but a few moments to let it all sink in and having Severus stop "reminiscing" so much would make it a little more believable. |
| ironmaiden | 2004.06.28 - 06:32AM | 24: Revelations | Anonymous |
| lol, i think thats funny and yet sweet at the same time that everyone is getting pregnant. very cute cant wait for next chapter |
| ironmaiden | 2004.06.28 - 05:32AM | 20: Family Loyalty | Anonymous |
| After reading this chapter, ive had a lot of mixed feelings. Even though this is all a fantasy i tend to leave my reality at the door when i read. At the the moment I want to beat the shit out the people in the ministry of magic, as well as Ron. |
| Katherine Rose | 2004.06.28 - 01:24AM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| I’m going to die laughing if McGonagall is pregnant too.... |
| Nataly Ravenlock | 2004.06.28 - 12:41AM | 24: Revelations | Signed |
| Hmmm....well, that's interesting. It would make sense that the binding energes would promote fertility. It's late, and I'm tired and that's as far as I am thinking at the moment. Awesome chappies as always! |
| Ezmerelda | 2004.06.28 - 12:24AM | 24: Revelations | Anonymous |
| Talk about a baby boom!
I can't help but giggle a little at the thought that Severus and Hermione's binding was the cause of it all, and I wonder who else was affected?
From what Dumbledore said, the magic could have affected everyone within the wards. Very powerful stuff!
Great story, thanks for writing, I can't wait to read more! ~"~ |
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