Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Aine Rowan | 2004.07.03 - 04:16PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Thank so much for the hard work you put into this story. I enjoyed the plot and characters. I am ever so grateful that you updated frequently. It's good to not have to wait and then lose track of the story before an update appears. My only suggestion for the sequel is to loosen up the dialogue a little. Sometimes it feels very formal, to point of being clinical at times. Anyway, I still loved it. I can't wait for the sequel. |
| Viki | 2004.07.03 - 03:56PM | 7: The In-Laws | Anonymous |
| i can i just say you are an anzing author you have had me addited to this fioc for the last week, you turley capture the chartors and i love your draco at the end, he is juts so sweet now he is remedened.
You have made amazing back story for the charters and hacve had me hanging on every word! you are oneof the reson i started reading SS/HG more than i did before!
i can't wait for the Sequell once gain you are going to have addited and i know it!!!!!!!
please start it soon
Viki (victoriahogg@hotmail.com) |
| Floris | 2004.07.03 - 01:05PM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| Wonderfull! I enjoyed the story and really appreciated the frequent updates. (Other writers, take note.) Am looking forward to what you write next! |
| Paige | 2004.07.03 - 11:44AM | 32: Epilogue | Anonymous |
| Loved it. Can't wait to see the sequel. Keep up the good work luv.
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| Daintress | 2004.07.03 - 10:01AM | 31: The Trial | Anonymous |
| I'm so proud of Draco! He's going to be a Black, which is good, since there aren't any of those left either, just like there won't be any Malfoys once Maria marries. A very interesting chapter. |
| lucab_69 | 2004.07.03 - 09:58AM | 31: The Trial | Anonymous |
| Yeah...this is an alias. Anyway, I love this story and hope the epilogue comes soon, seeing as how I'm going out of town Monday for a few weeks. |
| KajisGirl | 2004.07.02 - 11:03PM | 31: The Trial | Anonymous |
Great story. One question: did you mention the marriage law during the trial? I'm not sure if I missed it of if it wasn't there. Thanks!
Author's Response: It wasn't there. If you remember, he was tried for the murders and attempted murders. The Wizengamot informed him that he would have to give Veritaserum statements about the corruption allegations during his imprisonment. However since he died they will not be able to do so. |
| bookwmnjan | 2004.07.02 - 10:43PM | 31: The Trial | Signed |
| Wow! All I can say is that if this is what you do for practice, as stated in your disclaimer, I want to be the first to read what you write when you've finished practicing. Thanks for sharing this very good and well written story.
>^..^ |
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