Reviews for Marriage Vows
| FJDS | 2005.08.06 - 12:55PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Wow - I read this all through today - took me a few hours - and I thoroughly enjoyed it. A really good storyline, and although I believed a lot of times that I knew what was coming I was mostly wrong;-) Great story. Thank you very much! |
| Lady Laurelin | 2005.07.31 - 09:50PM | 5: Meeting the Parents | Signed |
| I really like the way you are portraying Snape in this story. Too many of the stories I have ready have him acting like a teenager. He is a fortyish year old man raised in a culture filled with formality and antique customs. I appreciate your characterization of him as that sort of man.
On the other hand, there are many common grammatical errors throughout this story. Comma errors are abundant, and they almost make it difficult to read the sentences. You should consider having the story beta-read.
This is an excellent story, and I am going to place it on my favorites! |
| Sarahantifany | 2005.07.29 - 12:06AM | 18: The Family Tree | Signed |
| Was Occlumency site? I wan't to read!
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| DarkSarcasm | 2005.07.03 - 01:03AM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| amazing! :D
I haven't checked if you've put the sequel up yet, but if you haven't please please do! |
| lanthir | 2005.06.28 - 01:06PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| Hello Selened, I am from Germany and I like your story. I hope you write more and soon....
Bye lanthir |
| lisamarie | 2005.06.12 - 11:35PM | 10: Marital Advice | Signed |
| This is just a quick little note to say I'm reading this story. It came recommended from a good friend, and I am enjoying it very much so far. :) |
| rae1983 | 2005.05.22 - 08:12PM | 32: Epilogue | Signed |
| i am reading this fic for the second time and I must say that the story is just as nice as it was the first time through. I particularly liked how you did not feel the need to make harry and Ron overly happy about the match, that was a very nice touch.
Thanks for a goof fic
Rae1983 |
| SeventyClaws | 2005.04.29 - 08:17PM | 3: Decisions | Signed |
| I began reading this story after reading what there is Man of Faith. I would like to see you rewrite this story and apply what you've learned to it. It's obvious you have grown as an author since you wrote this one. I like the story very much, but I'm finding the writing style difficult. |
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