Reviews for Marriage Vows
| Emma L. | 2004.06.24 - 11:51AM | 16: Investigations | Anonymous |
| Very interesting two chapters. I enjoyed them very much. Update soon. |
| Village Mystic | 2004.06.24 - 10:54AM | 16: Investigations | Signed |
| An interesting chapter. I take it your point of view is that Slytherins need only be pure blooded and can be more open with information?
while I liked some of the dialog with the parents, I feel that too much information was offered to them. The back story was interesting, but you may have had some of it be in the thoughts of the characters about the information that they were not revealng.
Looking like Maria is going to be Narcissa's child or at least Lucius' though an affair. Keep it coming! |
| Systor | 2004.06.24 - 10:26AM | 16: Investigations | Anonymous |
| Hmmm...I'm not sure where all of this is going with Maria. She's only 11 years old and Olivia would have died 18 years ago, right? I'm thinking she's not Snapes child. Unless she's not really 11? |
| Chantal | 2004.06.24 - 09:32AM | 16: Investigations | Signed |
| Oooo! I can't wait to see what that family tree spell reveals! Obviously Malfoy, but hopefully not Snape! That ritual to leech magical powers was truly heinous enough to be used by Lucius and any other truly dark wizard...very believable! |
| Snape Fan | 2004.06.24 - 08:00AM | 16: Investigations | Signed |
| Maria is going to turn out to be the child of Snape and Olivia I fear. The only things I don't like in this story is I think Snape needs to move on from Olivia and I'd wish for Snape and Hermione to start their marriage with just the two of them and no kids from Olivia. |
| Moyra | 2004.06.24 - 03:46AM | 15: Diagon Alley | Anonymous |
| I´m happy that I´ve found your story here at ashwinder (I´ve begun it at Whispers) and I´ve read it in one rush - it´s really fascinating, I do like your skill of writing, and the plot is well performed - nice romance and some exciting adventures in the background.
But I have to admit I hope, that Hermione will speak more for herself and let not speak allways Severus for her, although she´s now "Madam Snape" (I nearly can´t imagine the other pupils calling her by this name and not as Hermione ...)
But nethertheless . the story is really very good!! |
| Cherry | 2004.06.24 - 12:37AM | 15: Diagon Alley | Anonymous |
| pure evil leaving us hanging like that. other than that it was a great chapter, and overall a great story. please update soon.
God Bless
Sincerely yours,
Cherry `*` |
| Systor | 2004.06.24 - 12:33AM | 15: Diagon Alley | Anonymous |
| It's official! This has made it to my list of favorite fics. Update soon. :) |
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