Reviews for Being Hermione Granger
Jong_Kahn | 2009.06.27 - 12:29AM | 10: Nine | Signed |
I liked the way Snape presented the book to Hermione: there yet not there. Nice quality to the chapter. Good work. |
Jong_Kahn | 2009.06.26 - 11:42PM | 6: Five | Signed |
Good chapter! One correction needs to be made, though. Severus cannot lie "prone on his back", for a very simple reason. "Prone" means positionally "on one's stomach". "Supine" is the word which means "on one's back". |
greenenvy16 | 2009.06.26 - 10:07PM | 13: Twelve | Signed |
So glad to see you updating. Can't wait to read the conversation between the two. |
Charlotte Brandon | 2009.06.26 - 08:03PM | 13: Twelve | Signed |
Well... Hello! You have me caught with this story I read it through and through yesterday and I was so glad you updated today... I really loving it... However you were a bit mean with the clifhanger. I just have a sugestion I would like to know more about what Snape is thinking about all that's happening it's always Hermione point of view. Update soo ok? I'm really curious to read the talk they'll have in the kitchens... See ya |
PsycheMaia | 2009.06.26 - 07:59PM | 13: Twelve | Signed |
I love the way you've written Severus. It always leaves me just aching to know what he's thinking in any given moment. Wonderful to see the quick update!! |
swerley | 2009.06.26 - 06:57PM | 13: Twelve | Signed |
Yippee! Another chapter, and so fast, too! I'm glad you've got your muse back. This story has so much potential. I have to wonder, though, about Hermione openly discussing Snape's impotence with Ginny. What's to keep Ginny from letting it slip to Harry or her mother? Isn't that exactly what Snape doesn't want? I hope you plug this plothole, otherwise Hermione's just going to look like another gossipy teenager. Discuss it with Madam Pomphrey, yes; discuss it with Ginny - no way, no how! |
zanzi | 2009.06.26 - 06:36PM | 13: Twelve | Signed |
I really like this story--I can't wait to see their conversation in the kitchens! |
verasuspense | 2009.06.26 - 05:24PM | 13: Twelve | Signed |
Oh my ! How could Hermione have blabbed to Ginny about Severus's impotence? I suppose it will be all over Hogwarts within a day. |
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