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Reviews for Killing Time

BakaPyros2010.09.26 - 06:49PM11: ElevenSigned
What a beautifully written chapter. I LOVE the interaction at the end. Especially the last line, oh, and Hermione's support of whatever Severus decided to do. It's just so real and it flowed together so well. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm so glad that you liked the ending!

siage2010.09.26 - 06:18PM11: ElevenSigned
Wow, not what I expected. Somehow I guess I thought it would end up like most fics. Hermione would become a teacher too and they'd both move back to Hogwarts and get married. I think I like this better. More originality, more depth and likely more truth. Any chance for a sequel? Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, Siage! I'm afraid I'm terrible at wrapping things up neatly. I always kind of see a story as just a brief window of time in a character's life. But I'm really glad you ended up liking the ending. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Leraiv Snape2010.09.26 - 11:22AM10: TenSigned
Another story from you! And here I've dropped in at the second-to-last chapter instead of reviewing them all as I should have. Shame. I like this fic. I'm not big on many of the post-war fics being written now, but your style deftly handles the smaller dramas of this as well as the sweeping epic that was "Second Life". The character development here is excellent...and I'm on tenterhooks regarding Draco and Harry. What is their relationship? Very enjoyable and I can't wait to read the last bit!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Leraiv Snape. I'm awfully glad you're liking it. I'm afraid there's not going to be a reveal of the exact nature of Draco and Harry's relationship... ;) But I hope you will enjoy the end of the story!

Rosmerta2010.09.26 - 12:51AM10: TenSigned
This is one of the best-written relationships I've read in a while. You've made it so very real - every detail. Brava!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

aurora borealis2010.09.25 - 11:44PM10: TenSigned
"It changed everything and nothing at all." What a nice continuation chapter! I like that Harry took Snape's advice about how to deal with Hermione and her letter. And I agree with AmyLouise's comment about Hermione not getting her ideas approved - very realistic within the context of the story. Actually, Hermione's quest reminded me of the time I worked for an established company that hired a twenty-something wunderkind in a managerial position. He would expound at great length all that was outdated or wrong with the company, what needed (in his opinion) to be changed, and how he would change it. The rest of us wanted to strangle him. I imagine the Board of Governors felt the same way about Hermione.

Author's Response: Yes, I imagine that they consider her to be quite the upstart. :) I'm glad you found her rejection realistic--it pained me, but I knew it was right. Thank you very much for your lovely review!

greenwood2010.09.25 - 12:18AM8: EightSigned
I am so glad to see a few new chapters up. This chapter showed Severus to be relaxing into his new life a bit more. He is becoming...dare I say....empathetic to others.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're seeing him as... almost... empathetic. :)

vickic2010.09.24 - 10:23AM10: TenSigned
I love how much adult conversation and feelings you give these two. Your writing is spot on how I would picture Professor Snape dealing with a relationship and with people he wouldnt normally have any use for. Hes forty but growing up and you do it beautifully.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I do see him as growing up here, and I'm so happy that it's working for you.

AmyLouise2010.09.24 - 04:40AM10: TenSigned
One of the things I liked best about this chapter is that Hermione actually lost her case to the Board. It's very realistic - not only does she have to try again, but she'll have to learn to play politics. And Severus's reaction was perfect - this chapter was very down to earth and well paced too.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm really glad you found the chapter realistic and that you liked Snape's reaction--you addressed the things I worried most about in the chapter, so I'm very grateful.

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