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| hedgehog | 2010.09.21 - 09:43PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Wow! Virgin!Snape no more--very well done. Author's Response: Yay! And thanks!! | |||
| impulsecontrol | 2010.09.21 - 08:02PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| I thought you did an extraordinary job weaving together the emotion and the eroticism so that they each heightened one another. Really, really well done. Author's Response: Thank you!! That's a wonderful thing to say. :) | |||
| paddiew | 2010.09.21 - 07:40PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| I agree with everything Hexgirl said, but she said it better than I could. All that's coming out of my brain is 'hhhuuummmm.' Thanks Author's Response: I like the hhhuuuuummmmm. :) Thank you! | |||
| little_rose | 2010.09.21 - 06:56PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Wonderful. Absolutely lovely. You've totally captured their spirits, and I love Snape the virgin, and the way Hermione responds to him.
One spelling nitpit - her eyes shone dangerously. Not shown.
Sorry - i'm a bit of spelling nag:( Author's Response: Gah, homonymicide. Thanks for pointing it out. It's weird the little things that get away from you... Thank you! | |||
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.09.21 - 06:42PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Wonderful chapter!! Very powerful!! And very sexy! Author's Response: Thank you very much! | |||
| MsTree | 2010.09.21 - 03:59PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Loved it! I could see Hermione as still being a virgin, but Snape? I would have thought he had a little experience at least, but this was great! ^_^ Author's Response: Thanks, MsTree! I think it's possible to see Snape's sexual experience as having gone either way, and I've certainly written it differently depending on the story. When I was writing KT, I was very taken with the notion that he essentially went straight from leaving Hogwarts to coming back to teach, with only a scant year in between--essentially sort of arresting him in adolescence. | |||
| Lulupopalot | 2010.09.21 - 03:44PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Awww! Probably the sweetest sex scene ever. It's adorable, and a little sad, that he thinks about how cuddling is allowed. Author's Response: Thank you, Lulupopalot!! | |||
| hexgirl | 2010.09.21 - 02:45PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Well so much for rationing myself to a chapter a day. I got a little bit carried away. What a great chapter - I'm so bowled over by the authenticity of your sex scene. I think it is one of the most realistic ones I've ever read. In many he is the most amazing sex god imaginable with the staying power of a porn star, but I always suspected that he would either be a virgin or at least have no clue about intimacy with a woman he cares for. Of course the whole thing would be awkward and a mixture of desire and embarrassment. You got that over so well. I love the way you manage to write him in such an uncanon situation ie romantically involved, yet remain so entirely in character. Hermione too is just so...Hermione. I love it all, but wish I had been less greedy. Now I have to wait for updates - damn!! Author's Response: Thank you, Hexgirl. I'm really happy that the story had the ability to carry you away, even if it means you have to wait for the next two chapters. Thank you!!! And I'm thrilled that you found the scene realistic and Snape in character. Those are the things that mean the most to me in fic--so I'm very grateful that they worked for you. Thank you for such a wonderful review! | |||
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