Reviews for Killing Time
Roleyc70 | 2011.06.04 - 12:21AM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
Very entertaining and well written. So interesting to see the growth of each character. |
ann1982 | 2011.05.22 - 09:43PM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
This is lovely, I don't know how I missed reading it earlier. The weaving of the characters and their stories is nicely paced. I really enjoyed "hearing" each of the characters explain themselves in their own voices rather than just Severus' interpretation. Thank you so much for sharing! |
WanderingMoon | 2011.05.22 - 07:35AM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
brilliantly written :) one thing i've grown to appreciate about some of these HGSS stories, is the way authors make them not only entertaining, but witty and funny, heartwarming, and interestingly enough for a 'fanfic', thought-provoking. This story contains these elements, part of the reason why i ended up becoming something of a HGSS addict, LOL!
Thank you for writing this story. |
ickle_cat | 2011.03.03 - 08:05AM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
a really nice, sweet piece without it being fluff. i like :)
tiny continuity error, you mentioned that hermione touched the front of severus' y-fronts and about 2 sentences later said that he nearly came in his shorts. i'd imagine that you were refering to boxer shorts rather than actual shorts. other than that a well-written piece with almost no errors :) |
bluewillow | 2011.01.13 - 11:13PM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
I was absolutely thrilled to see a "new" story by one of my favorite authors. A light hand in writing takes a million careful edits.
I enjoyed Dark Santiago and Second Life is epic, but your story "If Memory Serves" is one of my all-time weepers...
I stayed up late to finish this story - but it was worth it. Thank you! |
Ves Heill | 2011.01.09 - 04:43PM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
This was truly an outstanding piece. There is a great feeling of movement towards the future, rather than being mired in the same old world of Hogwarts and its characters. I think what was most exceptional was the dialogue - it absolutely felt natural and as though you just happened to be overhearing the way real people talk about their various doings. Kudos to you on a job VERY well done! |
joanna_lyman | 2010.12.12 - 05:38PM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
Beautiful! I really liked your other stories, but this was my favourite. It was so real, and at the same time uplifting. |
lina0 | 2010.12.04 - 09:06AM | 1: One | Signed |
The story was wonderful, I really enjoy it :) |
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