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| cassity282 | 2010.09.24 - 04:01AM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| i love how you keep his charector going but are able to make him say things that need to be said. you do a splindid job of it Author's Response: Thank you very much! | |||
| londonlupin | 2010.09.23 - 10:31PM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| very good chapter with some very wonderful dialogue from Snape - nice job making him say the right things while still keeping him in character. Author's Response: Thank you very much! | |||
| paddiew | 2010.09.23 - 09:09PM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| Great characters. In the dialog concerning the Board's background and lack of real educational experience--I thought I might have caught a hint of an answer to Hermione's last question. Thank you Author's Response: Thank you! | |||
| FarmerLiz | 2010.09.23 - 07:49PM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| I've so far only reviewed the first chapter, but I wanted to drop in again. This chapter is a great example of what I like so much about your writing. You make the characters feel absolutely real, entirely human. When I read HP stories (JKR's and fan fic) I tend to see the action and the characters in my head as animated -- drawings -- rather than as real people, and certainly not as the actors who play them in the movies. (Nothing against the movies, but most of the actors don't look like the characters in my head. Except maybe Fred and George. And Minerva. And Rickman's voice, but otherwise he's too old. Anyway . . .) My point is that you make them real for me because they have very human traits and reactions. The story provides the drama and not the silliness of overly-dramatic over-reactions. Your Snape here is a really great example. I love how you've made him simultaneously a teenager and a man of some wisdom, experiencing new things for the same time with the same fear and wonder of a much younger man, but also with the perspective of age. No small feat to make them coexist believably. Great work, and thanks for the regular updates. -Liz Author's Response: I can't imagine a review that would touch me more. Thank you, Liz. I really appreciate this. I'm so happy that you find my characters believable as people, and I"m thrilled at the way that you are describing Snape here--it's exactly what I would have hoped for. Thank you. | |||
| who | 2010.09.23 - 07:19PM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| I love, love, love the phrase, "the words had such physical force that he felt winded". You are, indeed, a master of words! Author's Response: Thank you so much! | |||
| MsTree | 2010.09.23 - 07:11PM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| Such a disappointment for Hermione. I'm glad she and Severus had their little talk there at the end. I can see where she would keep trying and maybe bypassing the board and going through the Ministry. ^_^ Author's Response: It is a disappointment for Hermione, but she's a determined person, and I feel certain she won't give up. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! | |||
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.09.23 - 06:30PM | 10: Ten | Signed |
| Poor Hermione! What a blow. Although it seemed unlikely things would go her way. Severus is becoming very good at being a friend! Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you very much for reviewing!!! | |||
| trekchick | 2010.09.23 - 03:57PM | 1: One | Signed |
| I'm thrilled that you wrote another story. Only eleven chapters...sigh...I'll expect a never ending novel next time. Author's Response: Well.... but they're long chapters?? Right?? LOL. Thank you for reading! | |||
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