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| Bek Allen | 2007.03.31 - 04:59PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 10-11-2006 04:54
Please update this soon. I loved Dobby, in all his meddling. And it's such a different premise then most Time Turner stories. I'm really looking forward to see how this turns out. Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is waiting for validation. I find something very adorable and very strangle-able about Dobby. But he tries so hard! | |||
| macar0ni | 2007.03.31 - 04:57PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 09-11-2006 01:13 Rated 9
I like it so far, but its hard to tell where the story is going from here. Im adding it to my currently reading list and would love to hear more of it. >i>Author's Response: Your absolutely right. The first chapter does not make it clear where the story is going. I'm trying to establish the world first before I get into everything that's going to happen. I'll be interested to see what you think later on once more of the plot is revealed. Thanks for reading! | |||
| SilverShadow | 2007.03.31 - 04:49PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 08-11-2006 21:32 Rated 7
Great start to this story! I am looking forward to the next chapters. The characters so far are very well written. Great Job! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I hope you like where it goes. | |||
| Kappy | 2007.03.31 - 04:46PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 08-11-2006 21:14
Hey this is great! I'm sure you've heard this over and over already, but it's quite refreshing to read a new take on the time-turner fic. I'm excited to see where this goes; keep it up! Author's Response: I have heard it, but it's great to hear again! It's good to know that one of the things I wanted to accomplish - writing something DIFFERENT from the standard TT fics - has been noticed and appreciated. I hope you like what I do with it. Thanks! | |||
| Helena | 2007.03.31 - 04:45PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 08-11-2006 21:04 Rated 9
I think you have made a strong start to this story. Obviously at this point, you have the potential to take it anywhere, but I am most pleased that you have already stated the "Back to the Future" style of time travel - where the future can be altered by your actions in the past. This makes a clear difference from the standard time travel fictions I've read (and enjoyed, mind you) before. I look forward to seeing what you manage to change, and how you interpret the past. Author's Response: I'm glad you're into the Back to the Future theme. The flux capacitor will be making an appearance in Hermione's thoughts in the third chapter, I believe. And it will continue to be important throughout. It'll be fun seeing how things change according to the BttF mindset... And I also LOVE the standard time travel fics. That's why I didn't write one. It would be too easy to write what others have written and not write it as well. I look forward to reading your responses throughout the story! | |||
| brontegirl04 | 2007.03.31 - 04:44PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 08-11-2006 20:28 Rated 9
I really like your characterization of Severus. The backstory with Hermione was a little corny, but anything with Dobby is bound to be, I guess. It certainly explained her mysterious journey to the past. I'm glad you're avoiding the cliche of sending Hermione back to the time of the Marauders. I wonder if Dumbledore will make Hermione a student at Hogwarts, and if she'll take potions from Snape. Neat! I hope you continue this story! Author's Response: I'm glad you like my version of a twenty-two-year-old Severus. It was hard to decide exactly what he would be like... And yes, the Dobby/Hermione saga is VERY corny. But I didn't want her to have some really serious reason for getting sent back to the past. There's going to be a lot of really serious stuff happening in the past (Horcruxes, spies, potions, deaths) and I wanted it to contrast with the sillier quandries in life. And your guesses are REALLY close. Thanks for your thoughtful response! | |||
| kimjo2 | 2007.03.31 - 04:43PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 08-11-2006 20:15 Rated 8
intriguing start. i look forward to further developements. thank you cuz time travel ones are my fav. Author's Response: I also really like time travel fics. I hope you like where I take it. Thanks! | |||
| Lilysweets | 2007.03.31 - 04:42PM | 1: Wanting to SPEW | Anonymous |
| 08-11-2006 19:58 Rated 10
Interesting start. Usually Hermione runs into a school-age Severus in timeturner fics. This is definitely different. I can't wait to see where it goes! Cheers! Author's Response: Thanks! That was completely the plan. I feel like a lot of TT fics have been written - and written really well - about Snape in his Hogwarts days. I still wanted him to be older than Hermione, but they're both at that age in early adulthood where people start to really become themselves... if that makes sense. And I really wanted to write about how Snape turned to Dumbledore and started working at Hogwarts within that time period. And a LOT was happening during this time frame (we're just a little over a year away from Voldy's first demise). Anyway, thank you for reviewing! | |||
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