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Reviews for A Time to Trust

Darque Hart2007.09.20 - 11:13AM14: TimeSigned
Noted a tiny mistake. You wrote: 'She was caught; they both knew it. But when she spoke in a feeble attempt to ignore the truth, *Sevrus felt sickened by her, his stomach turning from his misplaced trust.' [You left the 'e' out of the middle of Sev's name!]

Author's Response: It was dialect. Should have been Sev'rus... Ha! Just kidding. I'll go edit that. Thanks!

auroraseven2007.09.20 - 05:34AM14: TimeSigned
WOW. just wanted to say loving the story. i didn't realise it was incomplete till i got got to the end i was like NOOOOOO!! more please more teeheehee brill!

Author's Response: I understand your frustration. I hate getting really involved in a story and then belatedly discovering that it's not complete. I am really glad you're enjoying it, though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Citten2007.09.19 - 03:48PM14: TimeSigned
okay now we are hip deep and you.......LEAVE US TO HANG!!!??!?!!? okay i am clam now-or am attempting to. i do hope that you are going to update really soon and tell us what is in store for our 'happy' couple right? well at least he knows he cant try and fool her and now he knows when she is from, now is how he will deal with it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Author's Response: Oh my! That was quite a reaction. (Mwahaha... evil author laugh.) I guess I've got my work cut out for me trying to get them together after the revelations. :) But you're right that the time for fooling each other is over. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Maddie2007.09.19 - 01:47PM14: TimeSigned
The secret is out. When you mentioned the Hogwarts: A History book, I guessed that it was a book from the future. So that's 1 correct guess in the whole story?

Author's Response: Woo-hoo! Yay for guessing! You win a prize... if I had one to give. :) Yeah, I decided that when Hermione was transported into the past, she probably had some bag filled with books on her. And what book seems to be ever-present? Hogwarts: A History, of course. :) Thanks for reading!

vaila2007.09.19 - 12:55PM14: TimeSigned
The secret is out! I WANT MORE! UPDATE!

Author's Response: Ha! You're making me laugh while I'm at work (oops). Thank you!

dacian goddess2007.09.19 - 08:52AM14: TimeSigned
Mmm, yesss ... I love this. The angst is still making me tear my hair out; especially knowing what a long way they still have to go before reaching any sort of resolution. I do like the 'new' version better - you're spot on with that paragraph now and it quantifies the reasoning for Severus' reaction absolutely fantastically.

The turn-around, on the other hand, has been so fluid that it was very easy to start taking for granted the fact that it took work for them to get to that state where they were trusting each other and enjoying each other's company (Hermione especially came a rather longer way). Their new rapport was very appreciable in this chapter before it all went pear-shaped. I do wonder what it's going to take for them to rebuild that.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for your hair (but very glad that you liked this chapter so much)! And thanks so much for the help with that chapter. I'm much more pleased with the way it works now, too. Good call on the fluid turn-around! I didn't want either of them to have an Epiphany Moment about the other. I wanted the trust to actually be built without either of them really noticing it was happening, at least not in a big way. I think trust is something we actually take for granted - until it's broken. And I think with the two of them in this particular situation, they got used to each other and began to like each other. Trust just sort of developed on accident. That, of course, won't stop them from being angry that it's been compromised. :) Thank you!

pstibbons2007.09.18 - 11:33PM14: TimeSigned
Glad the secret is out. What next?

Author's Response: I don't know what's next. More angst? Just kidding (mostly). :) Thanks for reading!

Crescentmoon2007.09.18 - 10:29PM14: TimeSigned
A very sad, but lovely chapter. Thank you so much for the great update.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter (even with all the angst). Thanks for sticking with the story!

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