Reviews for A Time to Trust
snapes_gemini | 2007.06.14 - 07:31AM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
That was spectacular. Iam so moved by Severus you really make him come alive.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's neat being able to write Severus at this point in his life. There's a wealth of opportunity there. |
Gwenog Jones | 2007.06.14 - 04:49AM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
That was one of your best chapters ever! It was remarkably well-written. I loved your depiction of both Severus' and Hermione's inner turmoil. Your transitions were smooth and everything flowed so well. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's hard to alternate between different POVs and scenes, so it's good to hear that the transitions worked for you. Ah, inner turmoil. So much fun to play with. |
vaila | 2007.06.14 - 03:16AM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
This chapter is pure tension. From start to end. Poor Hermione! if it was not in the past she would have been acting differently. What would happen when he find out the truth? When he find out she was/will be his student? Poor him then? What will he do when he finds out he will treat her as badly as the rest of the students.
Author's Response: Ack! Time-Travel Quandries! :) Let's just say I think the tension will only increase when everything comes to light... which luckily won't be for a while. Thank you! |
Crescentmoon | 2007.06.13 - 11:25PM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
This is such a lovely fic. I really feel for your hermione and severus. I cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it. As fun as they are to write, I get depressed about their circumstances. Thanks! |
ecco815 | 2007.06.13 - 11:03PM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
Another wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! |
oriannajones | 2007.06.13 - 11:01PM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
this chapter was excellently written. I really like where this is going. nice job.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you like the direction. Thanks! |
Crankychangeling | 2007.06.13 - 10:26PM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
OH YAY! Great chapter. The tension you are building between the two of them is great. I love the fact that you are taking you time bringing them together. It's more believable this way. Stories that throw them together right at the start are a little...well...unimpressive. Keep up the fantastic work.
Author's Response: Ha! I want to throw them together, but somehow the plot bunnies won't let me. They agree that you have to work for the carrot. And Unresolved Sexual Tension is just too much fun. I'm glad you're enjoying the torture. Thanks so much! |
skarabeios | 2007.06.13 - 09:13PM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
An intruiging plot, a wonderful characterization of young Severus, and the possiblity of many great things to come. Oh, and the sexual tension is maddeningly exquisite. Please don't keep us waiting long!
Author's Response: I think the plot is going to kill me; I have too many places to go with it, and I can only hope to keep up. I'm very glad to hear you like young Severus in this story. He's a blast to write. And the sexual tension is just because I'm mean. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! |
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