Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In |
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions

Reviews for A Time to Trust

a_reader2007.06.13 - 07:38PM11: PossibilitiesSigned
I love this. The breathless anticipation is wonderful, the dialogue very natural and believeable. Adding to favorites :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm especially honored that you like the dialogue, since SSHG banter is my favorite. And although I tend to overanalyze in the prose, I'm glad the dialogue at least can remain natural. :) Thanks!

Bambu2007.06.13 - 07:07PM11: PossibilitiesSigned
You really do this unresolved sexual and emotional tension between these two characters as well as anyone I've ever read.

This chapter alone is a bit heartbreaking.

Author's Response: It makes me smile just to know you're reading this story (even though you should be working on the Summoning... ha!). And thank you for the comment about the unresolved tensions. It's driving me mad writing them, but every time I do one of these stories, I can't seem to make it easy for them. Oh well! They're both difficult people, it only seems natural that they would have a zillion issues getting together. :) Thanks!

ecco8152007.06.12 - 06:37PM10: The Boy Who LivedSigned
This story has me totally enthalled! I love it so far and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! I think the next update will be posted today. Thanks!

midnighttiger2007.06.11 - 07:25PM10: The Boy Who LivedSigned
my god you have me in tears! i must admit that the first few chapters were more fun then any reall... depth of feeling. i'm not sure if it was the way points of view shifted or how quickly things progressed. at the forbidden forest i felt the tenssion, just before they kissed that first time i could hardly breath, and when Regulus was there with her i was as confused as she was, but this chapter... the depth and emotion in it have me litterally brushing tears from my cheeks. thank you thank you thank you for posting and i look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a sweet review! I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying the feelings and deeper emotions that have begun to creep into the story. It took a while to set the scene, so to speak, but I think now that she's settling in, she will start to realize just what is at stake here... and how hard it's going to be not to interfere. Thank you so much for your review, and you should see more posted in a day or so. Thanks!

MaevePotter2007.06.10 - 08:46AM10: The Boy Who LivedSigned
achingly beautiful..

Author's Response: Thank you. I think that's how Hermione feels, too. :)

Crescentmoon2007.06.08 - 09:47PM10: The Boy Who LivedSigned
A lovely chapter. Heartbreaking, but lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you. It was sad to write. But I liked getting the opportunity to show the loving family pre-Voldemort's actions.

Darque Hart2007.06.08 - 07:47PM10: The Boy Who LivedSigned
I found this uncommonly sad. I've never read another story that was 'current time' with Lily and James like this, with the knowledge that they had a year to be a family in. -- Which only means that you wrote a great chapter. Thank you.

Author's Response: I love Time-Turner stories, and I had also never seen one set in this time frame. At first, the setting was interesting to me because of Severus. Then, I got interested in Regulus. And finally, I realized that this might be the only opportunity to write the Potters as a family... because it is all too brief. Anyway, I'm very glad you liked it, as sad as it was. Thank you!

smrahl2007.06.08 - 05:38PM10: The Boy Who LivedSigned
I'm really looking forward to the continuation of this story. It's cute and completely believable (once one gets over the slightly-overplayed Time-Turner-Accident ploy).

Author's Response: I will readily admit that the TT accident ploy is overused. Hopefully, I've managed to make the rest of the story at least vaguely unique. :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. More should be out next week or so. Thanks!

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 [Next]


Disclaimers
Terms of Use
Credits

Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe

Copyright © 2003-2019 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved