Reviews for A Time to Trust
kuhlwitch3 | 2007.08.11 - 10:30AM | 13: Climate Change | Signed |
I really love the younger, hesitant Snape! Please write more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking this version of him. I'm having fun writing him this way. More should be on the way fairly soon. :) |
tambrathegreat | 2007.08.05 - 08:26PM | 12: Swimming | Signed |
I liked the interaction between Regulus and Sirius. I'd like to think that they might have tried to reconcile before RAB's death, but I don't think they did.
Author's Response: I love writing Regulus and Severus, especially as friends. They're both such potentially interesting characters, and it's fun to explore them. Thanks! |
Moon Turnip | 2007.07.29 - 12:20AM | 2: Getting Reaquainted and Manipulated | Signed |
Um... try not to add tons of introspection in the middle of a scene. The scene where Hermione meets Dumbledore and Snape should be full of tension and evasive answers; not a huge history that isn't truly needed. Either find a way to impart that information later by bits and pieces, or put it in a spot where the characters have time for thinking as well.
Author's Response: Interesting point. I agree that there may be too much introspection at that particular point, and it does tend to break the actualy narrative up. But as a reader, I dislike it when characters go off on their own to brood for a chapter. I feel like a thousand things run through my mind at the moments when it is least convenient, and I imagine that to be true for others as well. Perhaps I can figure out a better way of expressing that. Thanks for the tip! |
Severus_ Naughty Student | 2007.07.28 - 06:45PM | 13: Climate Change | Signed |
I like that all the gents find Hermione attractive. It's really nice.
Author's Response: I think she's captivating in her own way, and by now, she's probably come into her own... gotten over being an awkward eleven-year-old and whatnot. Why shouldn't she be worshipped by these young men who don't know her as the know-it-all brain of Gryffindor? :) |
Severus_ Naughty Student | 2007.07.28 - 06:22PM | 11: Possibilities | Signed |
It seems wishes do come true Severus.
Author's Response: Hee hee! |
Severus_ Naughty Student | 2007.07.28 - 06:12PM | 10: The Boy Who Lived | Signed |
*sniffles* That was beautifully sad.
Author's Response: Aw. Thanks. |
Severus_ Naughty Student | 2007.07.28 - 06:02PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
Hehe.. I know how much head massages relax me. They're blissful.
Severus 1 - Hermione 0. >.<
Author's Response: Yeah, I know I can't think straight when getting a head or back massage. I like Severus making Hermione all befuddled. |
Severus_ Naughty Student | 2007.07.28 - 05:53PM | 8: Reminders | Signed |
“I may have more experience than you when it comes to women, but I don’t know what to tell you about this one. All I can say is that if you don’t go after her, or if you screw it up in your usual charming way, then someone else will be there to reap the benefits. And I’ll tell you another thing: that someone else might be me.”
“May I curse you now?”
Awwww.. jealous Severus. How utterly tempting.
Author's Response: It's just so fun to torture him! Can't help myself. :) |
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