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| Jenny Feather | 2007.06.02 - 04:58PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| Ahhh! Alright, you are terribly good at this but I hope that I can trust this to lead somewhere. I'm especially interested in R's role in this. It sounds as though he could make Hermione's life very difficult. Author's Response: It's all leading somewhere, I promise... especially R's role. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! | |||
| beliza | 2007.05.30 - 11:40PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| Hoorah!! Soooo good! Can't wait for more!! ^_^ Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks! | |||
| rhiannonofthemoon | 2007.05.30 - 06:48PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| I'm really liking the story so far - I've avoided time travel fics up until this one, though I'm not sure why. I've enjoyed this one so much that I'll probably read others. Interesting plot, engaging characters, well-written and no grammar mistakes that I've caught!
I do have a question: what are Hermione's thoughts/speculation on Snape having met her twice - the first time being when he was younger and she was older? It seems that his older self would recognize her younger self's name and hair, if nothing else. She is concerned about telling him too much about his future but is she worried about him recognizing her later? Perhaps you've answered this question already and I've forgotten. If you have, could you please point me to the chapter?
Thanks so much and great job! Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this fic, even if it is a time travel one. If you're interested in others, a really good TT fic is "Somewhere I Have Never Traveled." There are also a LOT wherein Hermione goes back to the Mauraders school days. She did realize at an earlier point that it was not a good idea that she had given them her real name. As far as him recognizing her, I don't think there's really any way around it... as we'll see when we go back to the future later in the story. I can't say any more than that right now, but you're absolutely right that your question about Snape recognizing her later has not been answered yet. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! | |||
| vaila | 2007.05.30 - 02:56PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| "Severus's laugh" ? I want to hear them laughing together somewhere private - maybe this will melt the ice. I like the teasing between them. Author's Response: You're absolutely right! I think some private laughing is just what they need to get all cozy. Hmm... Where to put it... I'm glad you like the teasing between them. It should only increase as they get more comfortable with each other. Thanks! | |||
| longroot | 2007.05.30 - 02:20PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| I REALLY like the owls in her hair. LOL! Author's Response: Great! That was my favorite bit to write. I think I snickered the whole time. Thanks! | |||
| Gwenog Jones | 2007.05.30 - 01:20PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| Ahh, that scene at the end was quite wonderful. Poor Hermione! I can't wait to meet baby Harry. Well done. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending part; it was a lot of fun to write. And baby Harry is in chapter ten. Thanks! | |||
| snapes_gemini | 2007.05.29 - 08:58PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| Thank you, thank you! What a great place to leave off. Can't wait to see what happens next. love the owls in the hair thing laughed my ass off! Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed the owl nesting in Hermione's hair. It seemed like fun. I think it might come back from time to time... Thanks! | |||
| vision | 2007.05.29 - 04:07PM | 9: Suspicion | Signed |
| I love that you update so quickly. It always makes my day. Liked this chapter--the growth the SS/HG relationship is always fun. ;) And though the tone of Snape's inner monolgue was kind of off for me, I like the premise of him thinking of spies in such "Bond" way. Can't wait to see what he thinks of the real job. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I can see what you mean about Snape's inner thoughts seeming a little off. I'm trying to play with the idea of him being young, which is what made me go with the "Bond" portrayal like you mentioned. And although I want him to still be the Snape we all know and love, I really want to show him transitioning into that adulut. I'll pay close attention to his tone as I write some more, and hopefully, it will come closer to your concept of Snape. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! | |||
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