Reviews for It All Comes Down To Time
Maggie | 2006.05.27 - 09:53AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
Oh my.... Will she return to the present pregnant?
Author's Response: Will she? We'll find out soon. I'll update in a week or so. :) |
inebriator | 2006.05.27 - 05:24AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame so, how is this going to work in getting sev to become a death eater?
Author's Response: Lame? You spelled lame with 26 a's and you are calling me lame? :) There will be more to come about Severus soon. |
brenamarie | 2006.05.27 - 03:46AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
Oh Circe, this story is amazing. I am enjoying it emensly! Please update again soon! Thanks! ~Brena
Author's Response: I'm so very glad you are enjoying my story. I am having a lot of fun writing it. I appreciate your review. I will be updating in around a week. :) |
ynnuendomercury | 2006.05.27 - 01:06AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
I discovered this story tonight, and damned glad I did !
I must confess I didn't see the pregnancy coming, I must be in the moon, like Hermione...
Thanks for this nice piece of a story, I hope to read more of it soon :)
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you have enjoyed my story so much! I figured some people would see the pregancy coming and others wouldn't. I think most who figured it out probably have kids. LOL! Thank you so much for your compliment and your review. I will be updating in a week or so. :) |
snapeluvsme | 2006.05.27 - 12:26AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
oh my...don't make her go back... please!!!!!?
Author's Response: Now there's the question of the hour. Will she go back? If so, when? I'll update soon. :) |
pickles | 2006.05.27 - 12:23AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
that was a great update. hopefully he won't make a mistake and say something to black in confrontation...
waiting for more. have a wonderful weekend. p
Author's Response: Oh, now that would be bad. Can you imagine Sirius' face? I don't know whether that would be funny or not. I'm glad you liked this chapter. I hope you have a wonderful weekend as well. :) |
Sbrande | 2006.05.26 - 10:06PM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
Ye sI think I would be in shock too if I were Severus... Pregnancy is definately easier on the man than the woman, that is why I told my husband that I get to name the children... He didn't agrue. Thanks for updating so regularly, I am still waiting with baited breathe to see how this all pans out, and how different it is from the original.
Love Sonia
Author's Response: LOL! I think that is an understatement about pregnancy being easier on the man. Hehe. My hubby would say it was hell on him because I was so moody. And shock probably doesn't adequetely describe Severus' feelings. LOL! You are quite welcome for the regular updates. I enjoy doing so. I think I have deviated quite a bit from the original with what I have planned next. ;) I'll update soon. Much love to you and yours, hon! :) |
Ardeo | 2006.05.26 - 09:57PM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
I haven't reviewed this story before, but I've been following it, and I really like it. I think there was a bit of a lag in the beginning, trying to get the scene set, so to speak, but it's really picked up steam now, and I'm enjoying it a lot. I like your characterization of the young Severus - snarky and mean, but not quite as damaged as he comes across in his adult years . . . a hefty dose of his attitude seems to appropriately be teenage angst. Hermione seems really in-character, too - the brainiac we know and love, but swept away by her emotions. I also feel I have to say something to the person who said he/she didn't like the "anti-choice bullsh*t" - isn't the whole point of "choice" the right to choose? Madam Pomfrey gave her the option, and Hermione made a decision based on her own personal sense of morality. I don't see what there is to complain about.
Anyway, I can't wait until you post more. I loved what you did with tying the Marauder's Map into canon, so I'm really interested to see what you do with Hermione's baby and Severus' descent into evil.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to review. I have received a bit of flack from someone who emailed me about my characterizations of Severus and Hermione. Your description of their characters is exactly what I was trying to get across. I also appreciate you pointing out that Hermione was making her choice based on her morals. Madam Pomfrey did indeed ask her what she wanted to do, and the rest was up to Hermione. I was very careful to write this from Hermione's point of view so that it wouldn't come across as preachy. It did come down to Hermione's personal decision. I think it would have been unfair to leave her thought process out. It would have left a void as to why she decided to keep the baby. And that definitely wouldn't have gone over well with readers. I'm also thrilled you commented on the Marauder's Map. I love that little bit. It just came to me when I was writing. The thought to add that part in had never occured to me before. It just sort of flowed from my fingertips. The baby and the decent to evil are going to be big parts of the story, for obvious reasons, from this point. I hope you continue to enjoy. Thank you so much for a wonderfully detailed review. I'm glad that it picked up enough to keep you interested. I'll update soon. Probably in a week or so. :) |
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