Reviews for It All Comes Down To Time
Amethystique | 2006.06.11 - 08:20AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
The tension you have built here is positively palpable! The strain that Severus is under is huge, emotions are rampaging through this fic and I LOVE IT! Blessings LOL ; )x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is a wonderful compliment. I'm so glad the emotions I have tried to build are working well. I like to make my characters seem real, and their emotions are a key part in that. Severus strain is indeed huge. He has a lot on his shoulders. Chapter twelve is almost ready, and I will post it at the end of the week. Thanks so much for your great review! :) |
Althea Grey | 2006.06.11 - 08:19AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Oh dear. He's not had an easy time of it, has he? Well, I'm glad he broke it off with Narcissa before Hermione showed back up. That would not be pleasant. And at least he's had quite a few years to sort out his feelings on the matter... ha. I hope Hermione and baby are okay. Thanks for the update! Excellent chapter as always.
Author's Response: No, easy is definitely not the word for what poor Severus has been through. He found an outlet in Narcissa, but it is good he broke it off. Sort out his feelings? LOL! We all know how well that went. Twelve will be up soon, and we will see how it goes for Hermione and the baby. Thanks for your review! :) |
Nefertari_101 | 2006.06.11 - 08:07AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
this is a very good story, i cannot wait until the next chaoter, keep up the good work, and i hope it works out for the best
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I have put a lot of work into this story. Twelve is nearly ready and will be updated at the end of the week. Thank you so much for your review! :) |
Formeandmygirls2 | 2006.06.11 - 07:57AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
OMG! What a soul wrenching heart breaking chapter. I didn't know whether to be angry or to cry or both (so of course I did both!). I feel so bad for Severus and Hermione. Will Severus go see her soon? Will he still take her back. To Hermione it was only a few moments ago. Poor girl. What a mess. I know this wonderful update was very quick, but please have pity on us and update again soon. I don't know how long I can stand the wait. Pretty Please...... With Sugar On Top?..... Please......
Author's Response: I am so glad the emotion I tried to put into the chapter made it to my readers. I have tried so hard to do it. Emotional reactions to my chapters are a validation that I am succeeding in my efforts. Thank you so much for telling me about your reaction. Chapter twelve is nearly ready. I will be updating at the end of the week. Thank you so very much for your wonderful review! :) |
Firewall | 2006.06.11 - 07:53AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Jen, your story continues to be amazing. It is well written and captivating. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I love writing very much. Reviews like yours keep me going. I think every author has confidence issues and it is so encouraging to get reviews like this one. Twelve will be up at the end of the week. Thanks so very much for your review. :) |
Kappy | 2006.06.11 - 07:47AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Wow, awesome update. You're an excellent writer; I love the story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. What a nice compliment! *beams* Chapter twelve will be up at the end of the week. Thanks for the great review! :) |
lissabee | 2006.06.11 - 07:47AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Oh, don't leave it there! You're evil I tell you! lol Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens with the baby and with Severus and Hermione! Update again SOON! PLEASE!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I seem to have a knack for cliffies. Chapter twelve will see interactions between everyone. It will be up at the end of the week. Thanks so much for your review! :) |
phoenixfeather | 2006.06.11 - 07:36AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully, the baby makes it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this one! I had mixed feeling about it when I posted it. I was afraid everyone would hate it. Chapter twelve will be up soon. Thanks for your review! :) |
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