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| Caeria | 2006.06.17 - 06:37PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| what a mess they've all gotten themselves into. Snape needs to forgive Hermione for lying to him. Hermione needs to forgive Snape for not being a boy anymore. And they both need to do some serious talking. Author's Response: Yes, they all need to look at the bigger picture. When they calm down a bit, Severus will see the difficult situation Hermione was in, and Hermione will see the man Severus has become, rather than the boy she knew so well. Thanks for your review. I'll update as soon as I am able. :) | |||
| tacdogs | 2006.06.17 - 06:10PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| First, condolences on the loss of your father-in-law... that has to be very difficult. :*(((
About the chapter.... wow, wow, wow. Very powerful and moving - just incredible. You wrote each character's feelings and thoughts so wonderfully... I'll be re-reading this chapter and looking forward to the next one. Severus has years of hurt to try to overcome but I do hope he can understand that Hermione isn't the one at fault here. As for Albus... cruel is just one word that comes to mind.
p.s. The magical womb is very clever! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your condolances. It has been a rough time for my husband and his brother's, as well as their step-mother. Luckily, it wasn't totally unexpected, so it has been a bit easier to bear. He'd been battling cance for fifteen years. Thank you so much for your compliments on my characters emotions. I worked very hard on this chapter and, personally, think it is some of my best work ever. I poured my heart into this chapter, and all the lovely reviews make me feel wonderful. Severus has so many things to work past. Hermione and he have a lot to talk about, if they can ever manage to hold their tempers around each other. Albus was very cruel, however good his intentions were. I'm glad you liked the magical womb. Much credit to GeriPixie for that idea and for sharing it with me. She is a doll and has helped with researching things for me. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate everything you had to say. I'll do my best to get the next chapter finished soon. Thanks! :) | |||
| barbied011 | 2006.06.17 - 04:25PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| Poor Severus. Poor Hermione. Great chapter. Author's Response: They are both hurting so much. Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks! :) | |||
| swtcaro93 | 2006.06.17 - 03:38PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| Oh, that's just heartwrenching! I hope it gets better soon, because I don't know how much more of this I can take. :) Author's Response: It is very emotional right now. They have some issues to work past. Once they forgive each other for mutual hurts, things will get better. Thanks for your review! :) | |||
| Rosamund | 2006.06.17 - 02:17PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| Once again...awesome! I can't wait to see where this goes. And thanks again for FINALLY being someone who elaborated on Severus finding out about past hermione coming into the future and then watching her grow up.
Avanell Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I am glad that you like my elaboration sequence. I worked very hard on making it believable. I'm so glad that I managed to bring the idea in my head out to share with my readers. Thank you so much for your lovely review. :) | |||
| jaida | 2006.06.17 - 01:43PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| This is such a sad, but great story. It explains so much in this chapter. Author's Response: Thank you so much. Chapter twelve brings the past and the present together, so there is a lot of explanation. I'm glad you are enjoying my story. Thanks! :) | |||
| pickles | 2006.06.17 - 01:24PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| oh my that comment should cut deep. wow. waiting for more. hubby is probably going to take my computer privileges away. i should have been cleaning. yikes. hope to see an update soon. p Author's Response: I seem to be in the habit of keeping you from cleaning. Remember this motto: A clean house is the sign of a broken computer. *snicker* Yes, many cutting comments were made in this chapter. Emotions are running high. I'll so my best to update soon. Thanks, hon! :) | |||
| Formeandmygirls2 | 2006.06.17 - 01:12PM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
| OMG! Poor Hermione. Poor Severus. My heart is breaking for both of them. Does the baby make it? Does voldie get his hands on Aiden? More... Please!!!! Author's Response: Hermione and Severus are definitely having a difficult and sad time. I'll do my best on the next update. Thanks for your review. :) | |||
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