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| Sbrande | 2006.07.01 - 11:28PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| Ohhhhh, kill him Severus, kill him!!! Ha ha ha!!! Great job with this chapter, can't wait for the next one... I will await it patiently!!! It's great that hermione and Severus made up and Hermione is eating again, now all that needs to be done is for Harry to be slapped up side the head and he needs to grow up!!! Love Sonia Author's Response: I'm glad you are continuing to enjoy. Severus and Hermione are working through things while Severus is still being Severus. And Harry does need a good slap. In the words of Red Foreman from That 70s show, "Do you want my foot in your ass?" Hehe! More to follow soon, hon! *hugs* :) | |||
| siriusneeds | 2006.07.01 - 11:11PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| So much drama I'm on the edge of my seat with this story! I'm still loving it! Once again I have to give you credit for being such a great author. Just the right amount of drama, fluff, angst. You keep me wanting more. You are on my favorite authors list by the way! Keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter ~Cheers Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm am thrilled you are enjoying my mix of the genres. I have worked hard to incorporate everything. I'm thrilled to have made it on your favorties list. It really makes me squeal when someone compliments me so. The next chapter should be following soon. Thanks for the fab review. :) | |||
| Madam Sprout | 2006.07.01 - 10:51PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| Love it, you've made me a fan again to HG/SS. Bravo. Author's Response: I'm absolutely thrilled! I'm glad to have brought you back to, imo, the best ship out there. Hope you continue to enjoy. :) | |||
| Gwenog Jones | 2006.07.01 - 10:30PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| I was very curious as to how Harry and Ron would react when they found out about Snape and Hermione. I rather thought that their reactions would be reversed--Ron flying off the handle and Harry being sensible about it. After having read this chapter, I agree with the way you had them react. Upon reflection, I think that Harry would indeed be the one to react more vehemently as he is the one who competely loathes Severus. All in all, I thought that it was very in character. Very well executed. As always, I can hardly wait for more! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the way I presented it when all was said and done. I think that Ron has the ability to act maturily while Harry goes off once in a while. They are only 17, after all. My attitude was anything but predicatable at that age. LOL! I am very glad things came off as I intended. More is coming soon. I'm about halfway through chapter fourteen. :) | |||
| greymalkin | 2006.07.01 - 07:16PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| That was absoulutly awsome please please please please please please please update soon I am stuck in oblivion and need more!
Keep up the good work
greymalkin Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you are enjoying. I'll do my very best to update soon. :) | |||
| Haystacks | 2006.07.01 - 04:51PM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
| I think this is a pretty good story so far. The only real criticisms I have are
A) As in most time stories, the people of the past (in this case Dumbledore) adapt far too quickly to the time traveler thing. In an effort to get to the fun part of the plot, it is easy to glide over logistics. But they are important in giving an air of reality to something.
B) You cannot go 19 weeks pregnant without noticing some change in your body. It would certainly not be a "small bump" at this point.
C) Snape seems to be suffering from some sort of bipolar disorder. He does not behave consistently at all.
Author's Response: There are subtleties written throughout this story. I think that you didn’t pick up on some of them to have criticized what you did. A) The logistics of Dumbledore’s reaction were not necessary. We did see him cautioning Hermione on multiple occasions. He didn’t accept her presence easily, else he would not have cautioned her so frequently. He simply was displaying a calm exterior after using Legilimens, trusting that she wasn’t an Occlumens. B) Hermione did notice something was going on, but she dismissed it as nerves from the situation. Remember how she said she wasn’t feeling well, and Lily urged her to see Madam Pomfrey? And all pregnancies are different. You can’t tell some women are pregnant until well after 19 weeks. C) My brother-in-law and my best friend are both bipolar. Severus is certainly not bipolar. He is simply conflicted, confused, and not sure how to react to the situation. Would you know how to? I woudn't have a clue. I’m glad you liked the story aside from your opinion of those situations, but I urge you to read future chapters more closely in order to pick up on all the points being made. Thank you for taking the time to review, and I hope you enjoy future chapters. :) | |||
| Lady_Lily | 2006.07.01 - 03:42PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| This story is just so amazing and it just keeps getting better! I am so addicted to this story! GREAT job!! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you are enjoying. I am having a blast writing this and am so glad other's are having fun, too. :) | |||
| Silverbutterfly | 2006.07.01 - 03:35PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
| OOOOHHHH, Harry is so calling for it, isn't he? I'm afraid this isn't going to end well between them, but it might make Severus get closer to Hermione, if only to spite Harry... But he loves her, so it wouldn't be a sacrifice, would it?
Can't hardly wait for more.
Love, Silverbutterfly Author's Response: Harry isn't exaclty thinking clearly. I can't see this making Severus like him any more than he already does. *snicker* And Severus does love her, so he is getting the best of it all, right? Glad you are enjoying. I'll do my best to update soon. :) | |||
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