Reviews for I'll Never Take Advantage
Guinnevere | 2006.01.15 - 02:06PM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
Loving this. Another good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! |
Guinnevere | 2006.01.15 - 01:47PM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
Severus makes an appeal to Harry to try to exert some control over his wife, Ginny Potter nee Weasley. As if! That made me laugh out loud. Imagine a mere husband making Molly Weasley's daughter do anything she did not want to do, or stop her from doing anything she did want to do! (Maybe if she were asked nicely, as a show of affection...) This chapter gives more evidence of Severus' care and consideration for his wife. I love it.
Author's Response: Yes, Severus's view of how things work is, umm, unique! And, of course, his own wife isn't one for blind obedience. Glad you liked it! Annie |
Guinnevere | 2006.01.15 - 01:35PM | 3: Listening in | Signed |
Hermione is so rational about it all. But then, she did note that her mind woke up before her emotions. She's a good girl, and she appreciates what Severus has done for her, instead of brooding about what he had to do to her, in order to keep her in the magical world and thereby save her life. Another good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! She has her spikes of near-hysteria, but she keeps them under control. I'm glad you enjoyed her chapter! |
Guinnevere | 2006.01.15 - 01:22PM | 2: Minerva's Crusade | Signed |
This underscores the feelings brought out by the first chapter. You are an excellent writer. I only wish I could be as clear and structured, yet emotional in my own writing. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Annie |
Guinnevere | 2006.01.15 - 01:15PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
My gods, this is heartbreaking! He's so lonely, and although he claims there is 'no love, only power,' it's clear that he's simply drowning in selfless love that needs to be given to somebody, even if she can't hear him and isn't aware of him. Oh, wow. This is making gooseflesh all over me. Good first chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing, Annie |
breastlady | 2005.12.31 - 02:36AM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
I loved this story and I'm terribly disappointed you did not continue it. Is there a way for me to know when you finish the sequel? This new twist on the SS/HG love story and marriage of convenience is compellingly sweet and of course, we all want Hermione and Severus to consummate their marriage for reals. I loved the gentle way Severus talked to Hermione in the first chapter. I would like to have heard more of that. Please don't wait to write the sequel!
Author's Response: I've begun the sequel, but I have no idea how long it will take to finish it. They have a long way to go before they have a Real Marriage. But there's affection, and respect, both of which are good beginnings. Thanks for reviewing! Annie |
MelanieHill | 2005.12.23 - 06:47PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Annie Talbot,
I throughly enjoyed this story. If you ever do a sequel (so we know her decision and see if my guess is right) I would love to read it.
MH
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my story. I'm working on the sequel now. Once I have a couple of chapters under my belt, and my Beta approves, I'll start posting. Thanksfor reviewing! Annie |
scorched snail | 2005.12.22 - 05:14AM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
This was a really great fic. It was well written and easy to follow, and with a nice story. Well done and good luck with your future fics.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on the sequel now and should begin posting soon. Thanks for reviewing! Annie |
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