Reviews for I'll Never Take Advantage
wytchkat | 2005.05.30 - 09:25PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
that was sad-but good-may i please encourage you to write a second part?you have a great talent and i'm not above begging to see a sequel to this wonderful piece!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am working on Part II, but it may take a little while to post, as I want to get it right. Thanks for reviewing...Annie |
Celestial_Light | 2005.05.30 - 08:56PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
wow can you please continue this fic it sounds so powerful
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm working on another episode, set a little later, showing Hermione's POV. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story...Annie |
Rose Evens | 2005.05.30 - 08:54PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
I loved your story, are you planning on on doing a part 2 about when she wakes up? That would be lovely. Youre a grate writer. Rose
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I am working on Part 2, I hope to have it up in about a week. Thanks! Annie |
Betz | 2005.05.30 - 08:23PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
I like this little expository piece. Touching, informative, insightful. It gives a good a believable background to Severus and his youth. He may seem a little OOC to others, but I'd like to think that behind closed doors, he let's the mask slip and he is his truer self. I would like to see a sequel where Hermione does wake up either tomorrow or another six months later. Perhaps we can have a one shot of Hermione and what she is thinking? Is she aware of what Severus is saying and what has happened, or is her mind caught in a loop reliving what put her in this condition? When or if she wakes, will she remember anything? Perhaps two more one-shots. One of what is going through Hermione's mind in this vegetative state and one more one-sot wherre she awakes and decides to stay with Severus or not.
Author's Response: You're asking the right questions! My follow-up is set 6 months later and is Hermione's point of view. So far it's working (crosses fingers). Thanks for the encouragement...Annie |
nightingale8472 | 2005.05.30 - 08:08PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Please write more. I like the way snape talks to her.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. There's more to come...Annie |
confuzable | 2005.05.30 - 05:49PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
awwww i wish she would wake up
Author's Response: Well maybe, eventually...Thanks for reviewing! Annie |
Niblet | 2005.05.30 - 05:28PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Wow! It's incredible - so sad but with a brush of hope. I loved it. Maybe you should write more! Please! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. I AM writing more, this time from Hermione's perspective. I'm really glad the hope comes through. Thanks for reviewing...Annie |
Azulkan2 | 2005.05.30 - 05:00PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Definitely needs more. What happened to her to make her that way? Does she wake up? Does she stay with Severus? Do he and Harry actually get along?
The story itself was great, like I said though, just needs a bit more.
Author's Response: There is more to come, with some of the answers for you. As I was writing, the fellowship among Severus, Remus, and Harry was the most inexplicable thing (I certainly didn't plan it). I'm hoping it will explain itself as I continue to write. Thanks! Annie |
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